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One-Man-Band vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-14-04 at 07:59 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 08:00 AM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:12 AM.
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Fa real, just listen, my raps hurt... slash herbs, Pistols n missiles attack nerds Ya couldn’t solve the mystery of my dopeness if ya initials were backwards!!* Racked n serviced, bashed n’ murdered, like a rusty hatchet, this hack is worthless Why should I pick at the ice to melt ya… Im so hot all I gotta do is scratch the surface Multiple blessings, I got godly multis, fresh from the heavens to send ya to hell You know im good.. ya already granted me leverage.. cos said it yaself!! Fake ass, “ya shit aint real” n’ ya text is wack, get over it ya “cyber fan”..** after this you’ll be scared of ya own shadow like arachnaphobia to spiderman! Man, my verse is nice but its safe to say ya fell apart with yours A non-newbie battle got ya more “hung up” than “telemarketers" Appear behind ya, precise, slice n dice with spikes n knifes, ya body parts popped in a truck Disect ya wordplay, slash ya punches… but leave ya flow, cos that shits already choppy as fuck Rip cats as a hobby for fun, take a good look at Lusiv, kids. that's what you call a disgrace n' I'd newbie bash dudes too, but if i stooped to your level.. i'd have balls in my face. *for those that dont get that.. his initials backwards are P.I.. and for those that dont get that, a P.I. is a Private Investigator. **this had a double meaning... "ya shit aint real" and "cyber fan" is sayin he pulls cyber sex.. and also referring to his whole net record.. which is in the hundreds or something.. hes been rappin on the net for years.. |
got Ice Pissed Off??..best "turn " ya' keyboard Off
it's SUICIDAL thinkin' we'd battle and U wouldn't get ya' multi's tossed or Stabbed wit Pitch Forkz..Tagged as a Stiff Corpse for speakin' like "Broadz on Morning Radio Showz"..He'z all Bitch Talk!! 'dis fUUckin' Prick'z Soft..his IMPOTENT mind can't "Rise" to da Challenge Who "drove" U insane??..{answer}ICE Supplied him da MILEAGE Divide U wit Talonz..ya' Silenced when da words hit ya' Porez Omb's an ACTRESS..he made his Debut Naked in kids Pornz 'dis battle'z merely a RE-enactment of a retard tryna Match Witz imma End ya' Planz and "peel" ya' Bleek raps Now .U're flows is' "Limp" got a FEW Votez for sum multi's and U're cocky and Talkin' Sh!t!! One man band with his One Man Hand always ready to jerk his dick U Scrappy and show Resistance..but left torn."siTTin" on Turdz your mouth is my personal Toilet Bowl..ICE P always "sh!ttin" on HERBZ!! |
Quick and i forgot about this shit
i thought it was due tommorow IT WAS OK ANYWAYS LET THE VOTES BEGIN |
word we need votes... uppin... good drop ice... cept for that masurbation line.. played -_-
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YEAH WELL
SO WAS YOUR ICE PICK MELT SHIT pick at the ice to melt ya THAT HAS BEEN USED AND RECYCLED AGAINST ME BY 30 different dudes |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
ice pick??.wat happened man ive seen you come much harder than this...!not a bad verse,overall though your punches werent as effective as omb's...for the most part i thought your verse was good but i did'nt see the creativitie in the punches that i seen in omb's verse.....omb your opener was deadly...your link punch proved to be a fairly good punch...wasnt feeling much in between but your closer was strong enough ta be noticable.enjoyed the battle.....props ta both |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
Good battle.....Oneman...multies were well placed, flow was good structure was a lil stetched but nothing serious, punches were harsh..spiderman line was ill, personals were good too wordplay in ya verse was tight, good drop Ice....you had a few good punches jus not as many as him, flow was good, structure was equally bad as his, personals were subpar(not great), wordplay was there but never very strong your verse was inconsist it would hit an miss on like almost every other line, it was good but not good enuff. Vote: one man |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
yo this goes to one man band dis was a pretty decent battle yall both was spitten some fukin fya!!!! dam but i think that one man band had more punches and his wordplay n strcu was pretty good yo ice dawg man yo struc was off like u wud start to rym sumthin n den finish da rym on da next line n i was like waht da fuck??, but i got thru it n it was still good but if u had da struc on Q u wuda had dis shit so work on that, iite good battle yall n i like both yall so no hate theres gota b a winna n a losa so my vote goes to one man band v/One-Man-Band yall return da vote on dis battle i need 2 more so come on man vote on dis shit http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144992 |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
Lemme start by saying that I respect both of these kats skillz... Ice tore me a new one in our last battle and OMB is just plain old nice with the verbiage! Now... I was expecting this battle to be a lot closer than what it was. OMB took it to Ice and I was sure I was gonna come back just as hard... but... it didn't happen that way. let's go through the verses, shall we? Fa real, just listen, my raps hurt... slash herbs, Pistols n missiles attack nerds Ya couldn’t solve the mystery of my dopeness if ya initials were backwards!!* killer opener! hottest dis on IP's name since I been on the site. Racked n serviced, bashed n’ murdered, like a rusty hatchet, this hack is worthless Why should I pick at the ice to melt ya… Im so hot all I gotta do is scratch the surface average line for OMB... prolly great to someone else but I seen him hit way harder... Multiple blessings, I got godly multis, fresh from the heavens to send ya to hell You know im good.. ya already granted me leverage.. cos said it yaself!! personals w/proof is always good Fake ass, “ya shit aint real” n’ ya text is wack, get over it ya “cyber fan”..** after this you’ll be scared of ya own shadow like arachnaphobia to spiderman! liked the setup but the second part was kinda regular... slightly effective...kinda funny though...lol Man, my verse is nice but its safe to say ya fell apart with yours A non-newbie battle got ya more “hung up” than “telemarketers" ehhh... OMB brought his skill level down a notch with this line... kinda filler for a dude with his talent Appear behind ya, precise, slice n dice with spikes n knifes, ya body parts popped in a truck Disect ya wordplay, slash ya punches… but leave ya flow, cos that shits already choppy as fuck WHOA!... I liked that shyt right there! Startin to complicate his flow a lil bit... only real talents can pull this kinda shyt off right Rip cats as a hobby for fun, take a good look at Lusiv, kids. that's what you call a disgrace n' I'd newbie bash dudes too, but if i stooped to your level.. i'd have balls in my face. Wow... decent closer... nothing more to be said about this verse 8.5/10 IcePick: got Ice Pissed Off??..best "turn " ya' keyboard Off it's SUICIDAL thinkin' we'd battle and U wouldn't get ya' multi's tossed stretched and forced... weak opener... I expected better from you, Ice or Stabbed wit Pitch Forkz..Tagged as a Stiff Corpse for speakin' like "Broadz on Morning Radio Showz"..He'z all Bitch Talk!! Nice.. not a personal but a very nice punch 'dis fUUckin' Prick'z Soft..his IMPOTENT mind can't "Rise" to da Challenge Who "drove" U insane??..{answer}ICE Supplied him da MILEAGE uhhh... challenge.... milage... ehhh omma say no that one Divide U wit Talonz..ya' Silenced when da words hit ya' Porez Omb's an ACTRESS..he made his Debut Naked in kids Pornz definitely filler... not feeling it at all 'dis battle'z merely a RE-enactment of a retard tryna Match Witz imma End ya' Planz and "peel" ya' Bleek raps Now .U're flows is' "Limp" forced again... nice set up but failed to understand the punch got a FEW Votez for sum multi's and U're cocky and Talkin' Sh!t!! One man band with his One Man Hand always ready to jerk his dick non-personal punch... everyday filler line.... ehhhh... what's really going on with you in this battle Ice? U Scrappy and show Resistance..but left torn."siTTin" on Turdz your mouth is my personal Toilet Bowl..ICE P always "sh!ttin" on HERBZ!! wow... a very regular closer... i expect sum'n like this from a newb. i don't know what to say... Ice usually hits way harder than this but it is what it is... 6.5/10 disappointing re-match... OMB takes this one |
YEAH COOL
WHAT EVER 2 of those votes i agree with ILL GRAMATIX AND EMERGIN BROKE THEIR SHIT DOWN OTHER VOTES ARE WACK ASS FRIEND VOTES BUT ITS COOL I TOTALY FORGOT ABOUT THIS BATTLE,,,, WASNT ON THE FRONT OF MY SCREEN LIKE USUAL ANYWAYS PEACE OMB, YA DID OK NOT AS GOOD AS I THOUGH T YOU WOULD AND ME I DUNNO I JUST BEEN STUMPED WITH GIRL TROUBLE SO I AINT BATTLIN TIL ME AND MY CHICK GET SHIT STRAIGHT |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
whoa... ice pick... got Ice Pissed Off??..best "turn " ya' keyboard Off it's SUICIDAL thinkin' we'd battle and U wouldn't get ya' multi's tossed or Stabbed wit Pitch Forkz..Tagged as a Stiff Corpse for speakin' like "Broadz on Morning Radio Showz"..He'z all Bitch Talk!! first bar was whack...2nd was dat much better but atleast it had some sort of word play... omb... Fa real, just listen, my raps hurt... slash herbs, Pistols n missiles attack nerds Ya couldn’t solve the mystery of my dopeness if ya initials were backwards!!* Racked n serviced, bashed n’ murdered, like a rusty hatchet, this hack is worthless Why should I pick at the ice to melt ya… Im so hot all I gotta do is scratch the surface first bar was funny...once i got it.lol...hot multi n wordplay on third line...nice word play on his name to finish it off... ice pick... 'dis fUUckin' Prick'z Soft..his IMPOTENT mind can't "Rise" to da Challenge Who "drove" U insane??..{answer}ICE Supplied him da MILEAGE Divide U wit Talonz..ya' Silenced when da words hit ya' Porez Omb's an ACTRESS..he made his Debut Naked in kids Pornz coulda rhymed 3rd bar better but,still felt tha wordplay... 4th bar wasnt super lyrical...but made me laugh just da same..."kids pornz" lmao...dats a 'cool point'...dat was cool man... omb... Multiple blessings, I got godly multis, fresh from the heavens to send ya to hell You know im good.. ya already granted me leverage.. cos said it yaself!! Fake ass, “ya shit aint real” n’ ya text is wack, get over it ya “cyber fan”..** after this you’ll be scared of ya own shadow like arachnaphobia to spiderman 3rd bar::im not in to all dat link shit it gets to deep its whack please dont do it...niggas dont wanna search for ur explaination of a bar! 4th bar had a GREAT CONCEPT but u could'av worded it ALOT better... ice pick... 'dis battle'z merely a RE-enactment of a retard tryna Match Witz imma End ya' Planz and "peel" ya' Bleek raps Now .U're flows is' "Limp" got a FEW Votez for sum multi's and U're cocky and Talkin' Sh!t!! One man band with his One Man Hand always ready to jerk his dick whered u go ice? da first line of in tha 5th bar had me ready to laugh but it aint happen...not dat poeple always have to be funny but tha rest of tha 5th n 6th bars were not interesting...they were filler... omb... Man, my verse is nice but its safe to say ya fell apart with yours A non-newbie battle got ya more “hung up” than “telemarketers" Appear behind ya, precise, slice n dice with spikes n knifes, ya body parts popped in a truck Disect ya wordplay, slash ya punches… but leave ya flow, cos that shits already choppy as fuck 5th bar was ehhh...ok wordplay but u know, ehhh... 6th bar had hot multis on da first line...all i have two say a bout da second line is...my thought exactly! i never spit it but...u know wat i mean! great connection from slice n dice in da 1st line to "choppy as fuck" in da 2nd line...LMAO!COUGH COUGH COOOOOCOOOCOUGH HAAAHHK TU! DAT WAS SICK... DONT GET GASSED! ice pick... U Scrappy and show Resistance..but left torn."siTTin" on Turdz your mouth is my personal Toilet Bowl..ICE P always "sh!ttin" on HERBZ!! nice word play...kinda played tho...toilet bowl n shit hmmmmm? wat can i think of?lmao...just playin, we all do it! i liked it... omb... Rip cats as a hobby for fun, take a good look at Lusiv, kids. that's what you call a disgrace n' I'd newbie bash dudes too, but if i stooped to your level.. i'd have balls in my face. i dont know who lusive is, n i dont keep track of who battle who like that but...evrytrhing passed da comma(,) on da last line made me laugh my ass off! omb won with a more original n well thought out verse dat had good word play wit better multis metas n similis hot closer ice pick lost because he came wit a ok verse dat didnt have enough on it to take tha win...it was good but omb came better all around da bored... in any of tha threads I READ i dont remember thinking ice pick lost except to ME in our rematch(which has givin me an olser from stress)but this was obviouse... i would apreciate omb not voting on me n icepicks battle unless he thinks ice pick wins...because i dont want my vote on this battle to be viewed as a hate or a sway vote always honest... stank u smelly much! fuck omb...fuck ice pick...im out! peace |
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