*+*ludacris*+* vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

luda dnt take too long to drop. gd luck Peace

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 10:03 AM

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:04 AM.

i sadi 6 LINES not 6-unlimated

*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:39 AM.

yo gay boy gay boy ur such a wanker//
calling me botha hu do u think u r a wanker banker//
u stupied dick calling yaself elusiv G u rhyme lyk ur elvis//
ur the no.1 basterd hus got nothing in the pelvise//
batty gal batty gal u r wack u slipt wack shit//
im drop my dope stuff im giving u a hit//

yo yo ...time to rain on this nigga!!!!!!!!!

Used ludacris to earn lil extra street cred, yo u gotta work harder to gain ma respect//
All u dun is make urself seem minor, a wannabe fan,a copycat rhymer//

I shud inform RV dnt like biters, "ur actin a fool",tryin merk niggaz wit shitty 1 liners//
I like ur face as the avatar, its jus how i pictured u, this battles over "rollout" in ur car//

Cs ur a fake, and ur in ma way, so " move bitch" for fuck sake//
Call ur self a ho cos in this battle i pimped u across all "area codes"

BLap....this was to easy.....wat a punk....lol

Voted For: Elusiv G

elusiv won u bothneed to elevate that was staraigt sht

Voted For: Elusiv G

wow that was a shitty battle...

Elusiv~hope u werent coming ur hardest... liked how u used songs from luda in ur lines nice personals but u still could do better 6/10

Ludacris~ok u gotta reaa tutorial or sumtin... practice in the diss cypher dont just rhyme words u gotta make sense plus u spelt pelvis wrong, your structure was the best thing about ur verse...2/10

uppin uppin uppin..................................

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Opener - G, that was hard, lol, luda weak
Closer - G, Hard again, luda, weak again
Punches - G, Threw mad punches, G threw nothing
Personals - G, very strong, Ludas were terrible
Metas - G, for actually throwing some in there, unlike luda
Multies - Neither, didnt catch any in either
Structure - G, I dug that structure man, well done
Vocab - G, ludas biggest/most tech word was "Stupied" which was spelt wrong...
Flow - G, waaaaay better flow.

This battle all in all was a joke. No offense to you luda, I always give respect to kats try'na elevate, ya know?

Heres a few pointers for your next battle dawg (luda)...
-Longer lines and bars
-Harder punches
-Way better personals
-Try usin metas and multies
-Elevate your vocab
-DONT CALL YOUR OPPONENT A WANKER!!

Good Job Elusive, you got my vote because you basically murdered him as you can see above ^^^

Peace out boys, props to both...

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

coo not luda needs elevation but elusiv g did pretty well...

Please hit up my battle with an honest vote, as I have kindly just done for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...565909&posted=1
Thanks a lot...

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