*+*yung blood*+* vs Wrecker
 

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*+*yung blood*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:32 PM.

nigga nigga on da mky with his wack rhymes//
bitch there so wack he got it in the dayily times//
he calls himself Wrecker how gay can u get//
he thinks hes cool coz he has a 25 stone gal hu is in dept//
he sud be ashmed his mam is coz she had him rapping wack shit//
is his thing they made the word mig 4 him i got my hit//

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:57 PM.

good 1 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

damn it, i had a structure problem, lemme fix that.

Clappin' The Shottie, Hot Spits Come Quick |Drop Dip-Shits|Like |Bathroom Lobbies|
No Way To Stop My Swift Clips Coz Am |Like A Ghost|The Way My Punches|Spill In Ya Body|(spillin')

Breakin Ya Arms, And Your Left Behind When Wreck'll Confront|come front| In This War..
n|like an eagle| leave ya lips|Soar|{sour} coz am |like a doctor| the way i'll |drop blood on the floor|

Got Ill Rhyme Schemes.The Divine Prince'll Leave You To |Change In Color| Like Bad |X.P. Themes|
Ye True Nightmare Da Reason Why You Dye In Dreams, So I'll Put |Y.B. Down (why be down?)| Like |Confused Teens|.

Voted For: Wrecker

IIGHT WRECKER U TOOK THIS WAS EASE YA PUNCHES WAS HARDER METAS,AND WORDPLAY WAS KOOL U NEED 2 WORK ON YA STRUCTURE A WHOLE LOT BUT U TOOK THIS 1

Voted For: Wrecker

well intresting.......... not
opener:wrecker
punches:wrecker
closer: wrecker
overall:wrecker

drop an honest vote here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140004

Voted For: Wrecker

lol this was a one sided battle by far this was a good battle on this side very good stucture was tight and his vocab was even better the other guy need to elavate fast or leave lol:
punches: wreker
vocab: wrecker
metas: 3/10 wrecker 0 10 other cat
multi's: wreker
opener: wreker:
closener: wreker
v/wreker
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thanks fro voting, i'll drop honest votes right now.

Voted For: Wrecker

Wrecker
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

*+*yung blood*+*
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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Voted For: Wrecker

i gotta go wit wrecker on this one he came harder he had a better structure nice punches big ups to both yall tho

Voted For: Wrecker

confusing battle

punches- wreck
personals- yung
multis- wreck
metas- wreck
word play- wreck
flow- wreck

Wreck explain your verse after u drop it. good verse just confusin as hell. try some personals too.

Yung verse wuz way too elementary compared to wreck. try personals too.

Wreck:
"Ye True Nightmare Da Reason Why You Dye In Dreams, So I'll Put |Y.B. Down (why be down?)| Like |Confused Teens|." this is me. confused teen. good closer though

yung:
"he calls himself Wrecker how gay can u get//
he thinks hes cool coz he has a 25 stone gal hu is in dept//" um ok personal

v/wreck