*+*yung blood*+* vs Eyvon
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 02:27 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

*+*yung blood*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:59 PM.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 02:01 PM.

yo yo yo bitch ass rhymeing his wack ryhmes on da show//
basterd fucking his dad all day tit wanker his mam lky a no-no//
hes got some gay record theres no chance hes gonna win//
hes got all his wack ryhems as u call um imma kick him in da bin//
were he belongs hes poor hes mam was ashamed she had the cunt//
lyk i said this muther fucker cant rap hes crap and hes a grunt//

drop yo wack shit dude uppin

Yo some people say I'm whack, now if that's right /
I'm the freshest whack femcee that you ever heard, in your lifetime/
My slick accapella sounds clever with the beats/
Boy I'm the deepest thing since potholes to ever hit the streets/
Forgot a gold digger's succubus , my souls thick with ruggedness/
With the mic I'm like a dyke, can't no man fuck with this/
We elevated to new heights premeditated/
Let it be that I stated they hate it now that they see that I made it/
The escalated can be put to the test of greatness/
Snatch the heart from MC's and I ate it/
So I take it that's the reason I'm hated/
But pimping it, and acting like you could rock a show/
Harder than LL's Rock the Bells, but you is a ho/
Everything that you collaborate I lacerate/
My rhymes they keep coming like nympho maniacs that masturbate/
At a faster rate, yeah I got something for your ass to hate/
I blasterate, and have you all running master gates/
And as for face clutching and touching the flows/
I got them open like marijuana smoke up in your nose/
Bucking these rolls, I got that shit down to a science/
Leaving them hot and bothered, turned on like an appliance/
Defiance, no we won't have that/
You want your shit to blow up?/
Well I'ma stuff some dynamite in your ass crack/
And blast that shit to kingdom come/
Then bring them some of this real hip-hop/
I drop beats and you ain't singing or gonna do a thing about/
And you all knew from Meeko/
That you couldn't hold your own with the strength of Lou Forigno/
So stop that bullshit and flow/
Yo, you need to come with the real skills, and act like you know!

it was longer. shit! i forgot. can u just add lines 2 urs? or am i disqualified?

o and,i almost forgot, ima girl, yo. fuck that!

oppps soz
and u sud be d/q
but u can redo ur verse with 6 lines
or get d/qed

up to u
d/q or
redo so it got 6 lines
wots it to be
>>>>>>>>>>>>UPPIN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

ill redo it. ima just shorten it...... i guess....

Yo some people say I'm whack, now if that's right /
I'm the freshest whack femcee that you ever heard, in your lifetime/
My slick accapella sounds clever with the beats/
Boy I'm the deepest thing since potholes to ever hit the streets/
Forgot a gold digger's succubus , my souls thick with ruggedness/
With the mic I'm like a dyke, can't no man fuck with this!

ok go 4 it
good lucky to ya gal
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

so any1 checkin this out right now, vote 4 my new 6lined verse. not the other 1.
UPPIN!

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

Iight Both Of Ya Shit Was Weak...eyvon Ya Shit Barely Rhymed No Real Punches It Juss Sucked So Did Yb Yall Both Could Elivate Work On Ya Structure Etc