niggaz keep talkin
 

niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/...
but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/...
keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/...
wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/...


see niggaz call ciara myst but im a fukin villain/...
ill kick ya bitch ass whether fakin or on the reallin/...
i shoot perfect strikes wheteher aimin for you or them/...
ill stomp ya bitch ass worse then eminem did kim/...
when i say ill kick ya ass i mean wit no hesitation/...
bust a nut in yo girls face and call it a sticky situation/...
i rip the mic at times and make bitches look foolish/...
niggaz like to battle?theres no time like the present lets do this/...
niggaz dont fuk around cuz "niggaz dont want no drama"/...
whered i get my first ass from "i got it from her momma"/...

niggaz keep talkin bout im frsh on the block well you right/...
but dont get ya fukin balls in a not cuz im tight/...
keep thinkin i suck and i wont deal ya/...
wont be talkin with a fat ass lip now will ya/...

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin upppin uppim uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppim

this was aight for an open mic, drop.. if this is your first open mic, then it's nice for a new-comer.. take critism contructively.. you need to elevate with word-play, etc... but like i said as a newbie i don't expect much, but nice startin' out, see ya around, aight..
~wun~

aight thanx still uppn uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

uppin uppin uppin

this wasnt to great man...get rid of the "im harder than you topic" ..it played out man...you got time to elevate man...and find some decent rhymes.....pz

this was pretty good for a newcomer... but you just need to lookingto what wordplay..and imagery is in an open mic ...naa'mean..just to elevate....welll this was pretty good keep elevated and you'll do good ... nice drop..

yeh it was tight chek out the remix tho niggaz