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guji_gangsta 09-11-04 05:21 PM

Ill Keystyle
 
We fukin you mentally, givin your brain aids
I’m more versatile than fags at gay parades
I’m bout to blow any minute like live grenades
When’s my nxt rhyme droppin? keep you guessin like charades
I’m all about “F’s” in my rhymes like bad grades
Coz I cnt think of shit to say and my memory fades
Fuck amnesia, battle you so hard you’ll get a seizure
While I stand over you laffin like a maniac
Psychopathic rapper lyrics cumin more than nymphomaniacs
Preachin you, lyrical evangelist ‘sermon’ rhymes like ‘react’
I’m burnin you wiv candles you getting murked on wax
Shittin urself coz my metaphors be made out of ‘lax’-
‘Ative’, creative, indigenous rapper I’m a native
Masturbating with lyrics, cumin on verses
I’m sick with it so I’m busting a nut on nurses
Dick my suck, I’m even spittin in reverse

feedback?

God 09-11-04 11:06 PM

this was a pretty okay..drop... since your just a newb i really cant say anything but you had some nice wordplay.. some okay punch's/...overall you had a pretty good open mic... keep it up

guji_gangsta 09-12-04 05:54 AM

thanxs,

uppin for more feedback!!

guji_gangsta 09-13-04 01:41 PM

uppin for more feedback!!


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