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Lyrical Artist 09-11-04 10:31 PM

SICK WORLD!!!--A MUST READ!!!!! Lyrical Artist
 
Sick World!!!

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IP: 18CC 30C4


THE WORLD IS SICK LIKE EBOLA AND AIDS WHEN THEY MIX!!!/
LIKE HUMANS HAVING SEX WIT ANIMALS, MAKE YA WANNA SPIT!!!/
KIDS GET GRIPPED AND WHIPPED OR SOMETIMES RAPE!!!/
EVEN SATANIST SKINNED KIDS TIL' THEY GOT NO FACE!!!/
BONES OUT OF PLACE, MURDER HAPPENS WITHOUT A SIGN OR A TRACE!!/
AND EVEN THE TERRORISTS TRYIN TO WIPE OUT HALF OF THE RACE!!/
WE NEED GOD'S GRACE IN THIS NATION CAUSE ABOMINATION IS WHAT WE FACIN/
PEOPLE PRAYING OUT OF DESPERATION
BECAUSE DRUGS, SEX, AND MONEY IS THE WORLD'S EDUCATION!!!/
EVEN TEENS HAVE SEX IN CHURCHES WIT NO HESITATION!!/
(sexual) PERVERSIONS HITTIN THE EARTH WIT FULL PENETRATION!!/
HERE'S AN EXPLANATION!!/
LESBIANS AND GAYS INCREASES FROM GENERATIONS TO GENERATIONS!!/
THE WORLD'S FINAL DESTINATION IS IN REVELATION!!/
WHAT I'M SAYIN AIN'T NO PRESENTATION CAUSE SICKNESS STANDS/
I CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY EVIL MOMS THROW BABIES IN TRASH CANS/
AND IT USE TO BE MAN MAKIN THE MONEY NOW THE MONEY MAKIN THE MAN,
NOW DARKNESS EXPANDS!!!/
SO YOU START LIVIN THE SAME LIFE TIL YA OLD AND ASHY!!/
SO WHAT'S THE POINT OF MONEY IF YOU CAN'T EVEN BE HAPPY!!/
THE THINGS I'VE SEEN IS EVIL, IT'S LETHAL!!/
AND WHY DO SEXUAL IDOLATERS HAVE SEX WIT DEAD PEOPLE!!/
THIS WORLD IS CURSE AND IT'S ABOUT TO BE WORST!!!!!!/
IF GOD WASN'T LOVE, HE'LL EXPLODE US WIT NUCLEAR WEAPONS THAT'S BIGGER THAN THE EARTH!!!!!/
THIS SICKNESS MAKES ME HURL, MY MIND SWIRL TIL THE POINT MY EYES START TO TWIRL!!!/
I'M LIKE A SLAVE IN A CAGE, JUST STUCK IN THIS SICK WORLD!!!

LYRICAL ARTIST
MIC17PHILLY@YAHOO.COM
COPYRIGHTED@2004
LIVING FAITH CHRISTIAN CENTER
ALL WRITTEN BY LYRICAL ARTIST

Lyrical Artist 09-12-04 04:25 PM

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Give me some feedback ya'll

intensify effect 09-12-04 04:48 PM

IP: 7AB3 3000


Sick World!!!

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IP: 18CC 30C4

^^^^^^^ mods check that it might be bitin...........

MC Prephickz 09-12-04 07:52 PM

nice flow, I think u started off the post real nice and u got to the punches........um, not much else to say, nice post. pz 1

God 09-12-04 09:06 PM

this was a pretty hot read... your structure was pretty messed up

and for an open mic i would use // to end your sentences... your flow was okay....feelins and emotinos...pretty decent... wordplay..was good..overall nice drop..keep it up...

Lyrical Artist 09-14-04 11:42 AM

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