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Livin Legend 09-11-04 10:36 PM

Phantom vs Livin Legend
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 11:06 PM

Must drop verse in 350 minutes after check in.

System 09-11-04 10:37 PM

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:37 PM.

System 09-11-04 10:42 PM

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 10:42 PM.

Logic The Goonie 09-11-04 11:19 PM

if you think about it, no legends are still alive...
you just known as being gods biggest waste of life...
no joke, i read your lyrics and felt better about mine...
you could be a 13th Disciple and not Evolve to a Feeble Mind...*
you dont run ya city, hood or even street, so stop with all the talk...
you are the only inhabitant here with an apartment on "Writers Block"...
yeah you runnnin shit, and you takin it pretty far...
was gunna drop some personals, but nobody knows who you are...
you up shits creek with a leakey boat and old paddle...
and gotta cheat.......oh thats why you love closed battles...
lemme spit some hot shit, and lyrically blind ya...
and commit euthanasia, like you sponsorin kids from China...**
and i only battled you cuz i thought it was a bomb bargain...
you couldnt "pull a hoe" if you was helpin ya mom garden...***

*for all you Rb heads out there....
**euthanasia is called "mercy killing" and its pronounced like "youth-in-asia"
*** there are two different ways to look at this, try to get both

Livin Legend 09-12-04 01:47 AM

i know ya type run around with ya lil tight skirt cause u a fag "by-night"
ya scared to step to the plate and battle so u stand back saying "why-fight"
u ain't gotta tell me i nailed it right on the head so ya thinking damn "he's-right"
i'll break ya pegs, and then try to go easy on ya bars like a "damaged-bike"
punchlines keep on inflicting wound after wound like "piercing-needles"
and no one likes ya rhymes cause there played out like 1989 "buick-regals"
ain't no use to try to spit back phantom cause u know that "resistance-is-futile"
ya lack of skills shows cause ya lyrics are like yo-yo trends they always "lose-style"
if this were a real fight you'd be throwing phantom "hay-makers"
and ya lack of knowledge shows cause ya structures falling apart like the "la-lakers"
in a minute i'm gonna have twelve wins like a "baker's-dozen"
and u a fag so u need to go to ya corner and "rape-ya-husband"
u may think i'm mean but i got a reason for taking this win nigga i ain't "taking-it-for-nothing"
if ya so kali then how's this shit for compton i'll leave a zero by ya votes like a "playstation 2-button"
i thought u knew you've had this coming for a really "long-time"
i done seen fake teeth that are more authentic then ya "false-rhymes"
u on that mushy i'm here to battle why u wanna make up for "lost-times"
ya probably got a question for me which is do ya 'got rhymes'?
and my answers yea cause i got a whole fucking "arm-ory"
and if u a thug then my lyrics put ya 'bones'-n-"harmony"
ya not even coming close to lyrically "harming-me"
lyrics leave a priceless expression on ya face like da vinci "artist-ry"
my lyrics and punchlines share a connection like male and "female-karma"
put another l to ya record like a "female-lama"
to kill u in this battle it would "be-my-honor"
but i gotta feeling u might be another game 'wannabe'
u could even be shaq's height and still be "under-me"
i wouldn't be suprised if ya didn't even "spit-back"
cause u couldn't even break me if i was a "kit-kat"
carbon dioxide like lyrics cause ya lungs to burn away and blood breech ya organs
ya lyrics are prewritten like scripts for commercials involving tracy morgan
i don't think you'll be able to withstand my lyrical 'twister'
punchlines conjure up evil spirt's that will rise up and "hit-ya"
i refuse to sit down and be lil victim number 5
my punchlines connect to ya like the internet and nba live


*PHANTOM*: ANY THING THAT SAYS PHANTOM MEANS GHOST (FOR EX. PHANTOM HAYMAKERS IT'S LIKE HE'S FIGHTING BUT HIS PUNCHES ARE MISSING, PHANTOMS ARE GHOST)

1.)"ya scared to step to the plate and battle so u stand back saying "why-fight" (THAT'S WHAT IT SAYS ABOVE HIS AVATAR, YA SCARED)
2.)"i'll break ya pegs, and then try to go easy on ya bars like a "damaged-bike" (I'LL GO EASY ON HOM CAUSE HIS BARS ARE ABOUT AS RELIABLE AS A MESSED UP BIKE)
3.)"ya lack of skills shows cause ya lyrics are like yo-yo trends they always "lose-style" (YO-YO'S COME INTO STYLE THEN LEAVE JUST LIKE THAT, KINDA LIKE HIS LYRICS)
4.)"if ya so kali then how's this shit for compton i'll leave a zero by ya votes like a "playstation 2-button" (HE'S FROM CALI, LOOK UNDER HIS AVATAR AND THERE IS AN O BUTTON ON PLAYSTATION CONTROLLERS)
5.)"and if u a thug then my lyrics put ya 'bones'-n-"harmony" (BONE-THUGS-N-HARMONY)
6.)"lyrics leave a priceless expression on ya face like da vinci "artist-ry" (A DA VINCI PAINTING)
7.)"put another l to ya record like a "female-lama" (THE WORD LAMA STARTS WITH AN L AND THAT'S WHAT HE'S GONNA GET, ANOTHER LOSS)
8.)"but i gotta feeling u might be another game 'wannabe' (HE'S FROM CALI, SO IS GAME/G-UNIT)
9.)"u could even be shaq's height and still be "under-me" (HE COULD BE AS TALL AS SHAQ BUT STILL BE RATED UNDER ME)
10.)"ya lyrics are prewritten like scripts for commercials involving tracy morgan" (IN HIS BATTLE AGAINST E-LOOCH HE ALREADY HAD THE NUMBER OF LINES SET, HE PREWRITES, TRACY MORGAN DOES THE PLAYSTATION 2 SPORTS COMMERCIALS)
11.)"my punchlines connect to ya like the internet and nba live" (U CAN HOOK UP YA GAME SYSTEM AND PLAY IT ONLINE)

Houdini 09-12-04 02:44 AM

No clue
 
Its hard 2 exsplain who won.....Phantom u came HARD on this guy.......Livin' keep elevatin man...as for voting...its 2 ...complicated 2 jusdge..Vote...
Tie

[.:D:.] 09-12-04 02:48 AM

Voted For: Phantom

ima have to give this one to u son....

Opener:Phantom....i gave u this aspect becuz it was just betta then livin legends..
Personals:Livin Legend...you only got this becuz i didnt see any personals in phantoms verse..
Punches:phantom...becuz ya punches hit hard as well as some funny ones..such as....
yeah you runnnin shit, and you takin it pretty far...
was gunna drop some personals, but nobody knows who you are...
:laugh2:
Wordplay: ima say Phantom...it seemed like legends shit was too simple..
Closer:Phantom...OMFG legend that punchline was weak as shit...i could make a punch right now that would been betta then that...what was u thinkin son??

Overall: Phantom took alot of the aspects of this battle...becuz Legends punches were....simply wack..im stil ltrippin off dat closer...L:egend hella elevate....and dont try to call me out...cuz yes i will merk you...but no hate..just a honest vote..big up to Phantom..

Logic The Goonie 09-12-04 02:56 AM

thats some simple ass wordplay, and no, i dont prewrite, get ya shit str8....:thumbup:

Logic The Goonie 09-14-04 11:11 PM

uppity....the most slept on battle in history.....

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 09-14-04 11:36 PM

in my opinio phantom took this.......his punches hit harder and he didnt have to write an alminac [misspelle di kno] explain his verse....its a bad sign when ya explinations are longer than ur verse............... his flow was better an dhe took personals........ he controlled all aspects of this battle.........
v/ phantom

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 03:29 PM

Voted For: Phantom

Aiiiiight

Legend What Were You Thinkin?!?!
Haha, Maaayn, Phantom Murderd You, No Offence Playa Cause I'd Get Merked By Phantom, But Nice Battle From Both...

Phantom, Ya Hit Some Hard Punches That Really Landed On Ya Oppenent, I'm Suprized That Ya Verse Wasnt Better That It Is Phantom? ...But I Guess Ya Didnt Need Too Put Muh Effort In Cause You Knew Leadin Up To The Battle You Was The Better Emcee...

Legend, Mayn...Ya Flow Was Kinda Tight, Against Many Other Emcees On The Site Ya Wordplay n Metas Alone Would Have Handed You The Victory...
But Nice Drop, Keep Elevatin....

Phantom Got This
P E A C E

Logic The Goonie 09-18-04 10:48 PM

omfg! VOTE PPL! ARGH!.........................up:)

...Nemesis... 09-20-04 08:02 AM

when it comes down to it this wasnt a very bad battle. but the only thing was that legend ur rymes were boring and lacked punches. so when it all comes down to it i think phantom came with this one livin u need to step it up a little and make ur rymes more exciting.

vote phantom

Logic The Goonie 09-22-04 02:01 AM

can yall like um learn to poll maybe? and r u even active anymore? up.

Status 09-22-04 02:10 AM

Voted For: Phantom

aight bro you got this hands down.......

phantom: aight man that was heat i liked that....that personal line was funny becuz i dont even no who this kid is....lol man that was a hot personal......but you would hav emerked me with that verse....lol

livin: you was all around boring you need to take more time in to making 1 killer bar not strectching your punches and persoals in to 3 killer bars....see that is wat you need to work on,.....everything else was aight but your structure was also very weak....just keep on battlin and you will elevate...

vote=phantom


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