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grimripper vs young_buckshot
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 12:28 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
young_buckshot has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:59 PM.
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eat it grimm feel my flow,gotta pack of zigs and a bag of dro
you fukkin pussy gonna be a no show me and my venomspittin gonna blow a fat load like u a fukkin hoe i hate when ppl dont have no goal be like tha rock and know your role bitch u gotta fukkin clit ring in your lips walkin around wit your j-lo hips you fukkin bully your gonna get hit cause im tha grimm one you aint shit all i gotta do i touch u and thats it sit here by tha pool and take a dip you aint shit mann your fukkin wack young buck said it best **get off my track** peace yall thanx |
grimripper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:13 AM.
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alright check it
yo im out here tryin to prove that im a worthy rapper this guys like a bug getting merked by my bug zapper this guys wack thinkin he cant beat the grim the guy doesnt even have a win but wishes he were slim buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter the way i wrap dogg its electrifyin cuz its my record not ur that the people be buyin so when i win this battle u remember one thing that nobody wants to hear about how u got ice and bling bling |
its he's wack thinkin he can beat grim not can't..
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Voted For: grimripper
oo man.. i think ya'll both dropped no-show verses... YOUNG BUCKSHOT YOU ARE WACK AS HELL... flow was fucked.... lines didnt even make sense... grim u can come harder than that too.. but u definitely got this one.. u both need to elevate.. PEACE |
Voted For: grimripper
grim -
Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 5/10 young_- Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 4/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: young_buckshot
i'm glad you took my advice and worked on structure... i'll vote... your puinches werent that hard...7/10 you need work on flow...4/10 your structure was super...10/10 i liked ur rhymes...10/10 grim you never accepted my battle so i got no respect for you but you punches were hard...10/10 flow was off...4/10 structure was good...10/10 rhymes werent great but were good...4/10 so my vote goes to yungbuckshot... |
dude just becuz i didnt accept ur battle doesnt mean shit obviously u know this guy other whys u wouldnt have voted for him. dont vote if ur gonna do this. thats gay.
not only that i was probly doin another battle so i didnt get to u. |
Voted For: young_buckshot
This is a one sided battle in my opinion......... . Opener-Young Closer-Young Structure-Young Multies-Young Personals-None Punches-Young Overall Best Verse-Young . Grim you got alot of elevatin to do but it wasnt the worst i seen....but still i vote Young he had better everything....return the favor with an unbias vote on my sig....Peayce |
Voted For: grimripper
wow,this battle is the worst ive seen in a while, possibly ever......... but i got to give this to grim, he attempted somewhat of a punch with that bug zapper line ..... i hitnk...... you both need to elevate TONS, but im givin it to Grim v/ Grimripper |
Voted For: grimripper
alright both verses were pretty wack.. grim u came harder punch wise better flow.. buckshot too short of lines.. both need major elevation.. so work harder on that... you both are hella wack.. either of u want it step to me.. but i vote for grim |
Voted For: grimripper
Alright, vote goes to Grimripper! yo im out here tryin to prove that im a worthy rapper this guys like a bug getting merked by my bug zapper Average intro, basic punch, no real depth to it. eat it grimm feel my flow,gotta pack of zigs and a bag of dro you fukkin pussy gonna be a no show me and my venomspittin gonna blow a fat load like u a fukkin hoe Um...WTF absulutly pathetic, sorry man but it just is, you need to exstend you sentences and uses metaphores and wordplay! Intro goes to Grimriper!! this guys wack thinkin he cant beat the grim the guy doesnt even have a win but wishes he were slim buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter Lol, good flow, 1st bar a bit crooked but it is straightened out as it works through...good flow! me and my venomspittin gonna blow a fat load like u a fukkin hoe i hate when ppl dont have no goal be like tha rock and know your role bitch u gotta fukkin clit ring in your lips walkin around wit your j-lo hips you fukkin bully your gonna get hit cause im tha grimm one you aint shit all i gotta do i touch u and thats it Pathetic flow, sentences to short, rapid ryming(try to exstend you sentences and say shit before you ryme ok!!) Flow goes to Grimripper!!! buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter the way i wrap dogg its electrifyin cuz its my record not ur that the people be buyin These two lines are your best punches, the last lines not bad aswell, pretty funny but i think you need a bit of wordplay! Young buckshot has no punches, he just rymes. Punches go to Grimripper Vote goes to grimripper, yo well done man keep it up, please return the faavour and vote on one of the battles below thx! |
uppin here lets get this thing closed
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