Phantom vs Triple_N
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Verses due within 24 hours

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-15-04 at 01:52 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:12 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:13 AM.

at first i claimed you was the best, but then realized ya borin...
and knocked on so much wood, i thought i became a mormon...
on "inner demons" you chorus was worse, than the little bastards fate...
so keep 'fishin' for 'hook's............ will you try to masterbate...(master bait)
this ll be a piece of cake. me try? bitch hardly...
tou bout as wanted here as the fat kid at birthday partys...
its like shaq couldnt take the heat, and melted in crunchtime...
battlin this kool-aid addict, suckin dick for 'punch-lines'...
the cheap wins you be gettin, dont make you magnificent...
cuz i could beat you right now, and it wouldnt even be significant...*
imma just drop a quick key, and let him get beat in 3 minutes...
aint it funny how i use my "comp" to defeat......what he isnt...
youre just the vet that never made it cuz you aint got the mastery, you think...
ill just have to cannibalize you, and use your brain fluids for a drink...
youre verse didnt cut it, just after the first or letter or two...
i got niggas who wanna be me that are 10 times better than you...
Never, Never, Never <----- thats about when youll be on my level...
you coulda been chillin with the gods, but had to follow the devil...**
youre chances of 'changin' ya loss to me are definatly 'remote'...
ya master of punchlines credential, has just been lyrically revoked...

* just look at how many losses he has
** he WAS in audiology which became a part of A.I but he decided to go to MK and their leader is "^Lucifer^", just in case you didnt get that...

Ok here we go!!!!!!!!!!


They should create a thread for dickrider award
Cuz u turned looch's dick into an ambilical cord
Ya verses are a thesis for proctology class
Ya flow & structure support inner workings of ass
My flow "percipitates" on da verses u facilitate
Make ya "pay for each land" like my punches were real estate
Mine's so outshines yours dat I already won twice
Ya punches are "bitter salesman" they jus "act nice"
This battle's a side show, it need to charge admission
Cuz to see ya talent is like "ya name" a apparition
Ask this "A.I." "Da answer" to his wackness
U winnin's like playin' pick 3 wit 4 digits, hapless
This is as competive as Shaq vs Stuart Little on da pine
Cuz da wackness u posess is more repetitve than "time"
U think ya verse is ill?...a real battle ya-owe-me
I'm da fork poppin' the bubble in this "fried bologny"
U should lube ya words maybe they'll flow smoother
Rhymes could "fire at da masses" an not be crowd mover
As an "appliance aisle" an wouldn't habor 1 fan
Ya verses represent "a lose" like a widow's wedding ban


Explanations: Phatom's dictionary difiniton is--->apparitionan, something having appearance with no subsatnce
Apparition means--> a ghost
Hapless means-->luckless<-->a meta for hopeless
When I use percipitate I mean my style is above yours cuz to rain on something u gotta be above it.
Everything else I think is pretty clear, if not jus pm me or AIM for explanation.

correction to 19th line its:

As an "appliance aisle" U wouldn't habor 1 fan

where all the votes at? this battle is dope....up.

uppity .

Voted For: Triple_N

dayumm
phantom
ur flow was okay,punches were decent in this they hit when needed,u had a couple personals and thats a plus man,ur structure was decent also...not bad decent verse yo

triple nu had nice metas,and your srtucture was good...including your flow which happened to be excellent,ur punches werre solid,and your personals were there includin the first line that was funny....nice verse man

overall triple n had the much better and complex verse,he had better personals,flow,and punches which just hit harder,i mean phantom you came decent its just that triple n came better thats all....good battle

v/triple n

Voted For: Triple_N

good battle to both mc's but ima give this one to triple n for having a good structure an usen some good vocab um both of you was aight expected a lil more for this kinda battle but hey what you gonna do phantom didnt see much vocab from ya an what made me not like your verse was tha structure but it was still good but vote/triple n

ehh, thanx for votin im ashamed now......but good job triple...

Uppin this for honest explained votes, come vote y'all

Voted For: Triple_N

Hmmm.....I wasn't too impressed with this one.

Triple had a few nice punch lines and overall his shit flowed well. Some of his punches just seemed to lack the power to hit hard. Nice verse though.....just gotta be a little harder hitting :thumbup:

Phantom came with some of the most played lines I've ever seen. I mean honestly, do you really think you came up with that master bait line all by yourself? Oh, and that Kool-aid/punch-line one too.....WOW! Plus you had a lot of really stretched lines in there....at this stage you should be way past that stretched style.....overall I felt you could have done much better.

Vote - Triple_N

Voted For: Triple_N


at first i claimed you was the best, but then realized ya borin...
and knocked on so much wood, i thought i became a mormon...
2/10
on "inner demons" you chorus was worse, than the little bastards fate...
so keep 'fishin' for 'hook's............ will you try to masterbate...(master bait)
1/10
this ll be a piece of cake. me try? bitch hardly...
tou bout as wanted here as the fat kid at birthday partys...
1/10
its like shaq couldnt take the heat, and melted in crunchtime...
battlin this kool-aid addict, suckin dick for 'punch-lines'...
3/10
the cheap wins you be gettin, dont make you magnificent...
cuz i could beat you right now, and it wouldnt even be significant...*
2/10
imma just drop a quick key, and let him get beat in 3 minutes...
aint it funny how i use my "comp" to defeat......what he isnt...
2/10
youre just the vet that never made it cuz you aint got the mastery, you think...
ill just have to cannibalize you, and use your brain fluids for a drink...
2/10
youre verse didnt cut it, just after the first or letter or two...
i got niggas who wanna be me that are 10 times better than you...
1/10
Never, Never, Never <----- thats about when youll be on my level...
you coulda been chillin with the gods, but had to follow the devil...**
1/10
youre chances of 'changin' ya loss to me are definatly 'remote'...
ya master of punchlines credential, has just been lyrically revoked...
3/10

Punches were there but they were all simple and ya wordplay was ok words used over and over again
meta's were kinda there but they didnt come hard
Personals werent there and ya complexity was average
structure was good and so was ya vocab


They should create a thread for dickrider award
Cuz u turned looch's dick into an ambilical cord
3/10
Ya verses are a thesis for proctology class
Ya flow & structure support inner workings of ass
1/10
My flow "percipitates" on da verses u facilitate
Make ya "pay for each land" like my punches were real estate
4/10
Mine's so outshines yours dat I already won twice
Ya punches are "bitter salesman" they jus "act nice"
2/10
This battle's a side show, it need to charge admission
Cuz to see ya talent is like "ya name" a apparition
3/10
Ask this "A.I." "Da answer" to his wackness
U winnin's like playin' pick 3 wit 4 digits, hapless
2/10
This is as competive as Shaq vs Stuart Little on da pine
Cuz da wackness u posess is more repetitve than "time"
4/10
U think ya verse is ill?...a real battle ya-owe-me
I'm da fork poppin' the bubble in this "fried bologny"
3/10
U should lube ya words maybe they'll flow smoother
Rhymes could "fire at da masses" an not be crowd mover
2/10
As an "appliance aisle" an wouldn't habor 1 fan
Ya verses represent "a lose" like a widow's wedding ban
2/10

ya punches were good werent that clever but they got the job done
ya complexity was good and so was ya structure
ya wordplay was good and u used good choice of vocab
ya meta's were good overall due 2 ya punches and wordplay
u get my vote

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

Can't vote on this, I'm just chekin' the polls...