SoLe vs Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
 

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 06:35 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

u betta check in........lets get this shit started

SoLe has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 06:11 AM.

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 06:13 AM.

dis prick is exsposed,u only battle noobs u aint gifted wit flows
i aint got problem twistin ya nose..trust me da clipp a explode.
da world's mine im grippin da globe..ppl im sick n he kno's....
after dis RV gon be like some "old kick's" soon missin its "sole"

boy is dis kidd wack..u should play with toy's n just kick back
8 lines ok! ima "kill em with 4 bar's" like a "poisones kit kat".....

he spit bar's but nun r like dis,cant rap so u wanna lite clips??
ur corny ass aint on my level & "#1" u scared of da "sonofisis"
^^^true story...

I spit magic rap-Shit to attack dicks that act-big, bitch you'll get ya Ass-kicked...
with tragic clap-hits. you couldn't pull a win from a cap if you was doin hat-tricks!!!
I'm Bia slappin this kid rapper wit violent-actions cause pain-happens...
Put this kids brain & dictionary in a box thats the only knowledge ya-packin!!!
Evidently ur nuts, Sole’s whack?' nah..but I'm doin ya just...
Ya death is a must ! Treat ya like Phillys Blunts, cut ya open N empty ya guts!!!

:::::::::::::::FINISHER!!!!!:::::::::::::::

Faggot put ya' purse-on-ya-hip...this battle is like fat girls in changing rooms, definitely "closed-curtained-this-Bitch"..
I’m worse-with-my-fists...why dig up Shit on you when your life itself is a personal-diss!!!!!

You asked for this......

too bad he was scared to accept my battle with him...so he retired from text

but u dropped a good battle.....i wish u luck on votes playa

Voted For: SoLe

punches: sole
personals: dplk
multis: sole
metas: sole

sole came harder with punches and metas.....dplk urs was okay it wasnt garbage but it wasnt as good as soles

overall:
sole: 7/10
dplk: 6/10

vote/ sole

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that was the wrong link return vote here [honest]

dont freepost in mah shit playa...i already returned a vote

lol okay uppin 4 more votes

Voted For: SoLe

I spit magic rap-Shit to attack dicks that act-big, bitch you'll get ya Ass-kicked...
with tragic clap-hits. you couldn't pull a win from a cap if you was doin hat-tricks!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER SOLE

I'm Bia slappin this kid rapper wit violent-actions cause pain-happens...
Put this kids brain & dictionary in a box thats the only knowledge ya-packin!!!
Evidently ur nuts, Sole’s whack?' nah..but I'm doin ya just...
Ya death is a must ! Treat ya like Phillys Blunts, cut ya open N empty ya guts!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS ILL NICE MAYNE PUNCHES WERE HARD

Faggot put ya' purse-on-ya-hip...this battle is like fat girls in changing rooms, definitely "closed-curtained-this-Bitch"..
I’m worse-with-my-fists...why dig up Shit on you when your life itself is a personal-diss!!!!!

You asked for this......
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAMN NICE CLOSA FO SHO

9/10

dis prick is exsposed,u only battle noobs u aint gifted wit flows
i aint got problem twistin ya nose..trust me da clipp a explode.
da world's mine im grippin da globe..ppl im sick n he kno's....
after dis RV gon be like some "old kick's" soon missin its "sole"
^^^^^^^^^^ LOL GOOD OPENER AND GOOD PUNCH

boy is dis kidd wack..u should play with toy's n just kick back
8 lines ok! ima "kill em with 4 bar's" like a "poisones kit kat".....
^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH

he spit bar's but nun r like dis,cant rap so u wanna lite clips??
ur corny ass aint on my level & "#1" u scared of da "sonofisis"
^^^true story...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DAT LAST CLOSA WAS GOOD CUZ U USE PERSONALS AND A PUNCH TO GO WITH IT NICE MAYNE

BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN SOLE BUT IT WAS AN NICE AND CLOSE BATTLE BETWEEN DA BOTH OF YALL

YO KEEP AT IT

V-SOLE RETURN AN FAV

This was feedback posted for Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
 

u can win dis man jus work on it... besides how come you didnt reply yo... to the crew...

Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

Here is my honest opinion/vote on this battle...

Punchline: Very good Structure, Excellent wordplay and whitty/clever punches. I really dug that verse man, 7.5/10
Props dawg, very well done.

Sole: I dont like self-glorifying lines, which you had a few, while punchlines verse had none, your structures are still kinda sketchy...try cleaning it up and make it easier to read, and you dont have to tell us where your finishers are cause its obviously the last bar of a verse for anyone...5/10
Good effort man, props

This is just an honest opinion on this battle that I posted. No hate boys, theres gotta be one winner and I felt that PunchlineKing just wanted it more and came out to win with this one...great job, peace.