aberrant vs untouchablekilla
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 01:42 PM

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aberrant has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:44 PM.

untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:47 PM.

ill renegade and rent a blade basically diminish your existence
kill you and win this gay ass battle before i finish a sentence
if tha game was ya dick, you couldnt get up on this rap shit
youll never surpass my bars like chin-ups from a fat-chick
This dawg had visions of a win, but it was just a dream
aberrant only comes hard with asain porn and masturbation cream
post ur rhymes next to mines and the truth of whack-ness will reflect
cause if u wrote ur punches on lego blocks, they still wouldn’t connect
connectin ya wit my final strike to leave ya in broken segments
if 1 line will fuck this bitch up then a verse will leave him pregnant

Your "wastin paper" writin down ya "uneconomical" lyrics
You couldnt structure somethin "explosive" if you were studyin "atomic" physics!!
Come on, face the reality, your misty like water vapour
You couldnt write somethin hot if we set alight your fuckin paper!!
Ive caught this cunt off guard, leavin him battered, bruised and scarred
You couldnt "book" a place near me even if you owned a "library" card!!
Right, imma flip ya name and complete the process by changin the "tense"
*"killed" without touch* seems to make a lot more sense!!
So im done, your merked, i just spat raps scripture
Like a winning bid at an auction.... sucka, you got the picture!!

uppin for votes. Nice verse by the way man........

Voted For: untouchablekilla

decent battle...landslide victory tho

Punches - untouchable...his shyt was hittin harder then aberrants...barz 2, 3, & 4 were pretty iLL...big ups to untouchable

Personals - tie...wasnt really anything personal u had on each other...jus some random punches

Meta4s - tie...no ill shyt that made me think...jus some funny ass barz by untouchable...work on da metas iigh

Wordplay - tie...both verses were easy to read n got to ad point so it was =

Quick Note - "Your "wastin paper" writin down ya "uneconomical" lyrics
You couldnt structure somethin "explosive" if you were studyin "atomic" physics!!
Come on, face the reality, your misty like water vapour
You couldnt write somethin hot if we set alight your fuckin paper!!"...i think that was real corny cuz u played that PAPER shyt UGLY...that brought the whole verse down talkin bout paper twice...get creative fam..feel me ?

Another Quick Note - DONT SAY WACKNESS...prolly the most garbage word i ever heard lolol...jus say WACK...jus my opinion

all n all this vote came down to da punches...cuz das wut a battle is basically...so Untouchable came harder n more direct so das wut took da cake in dis....Cheya !

Vote - Untouchablekilla

drop n honest vote on da battle in my sig...Cheya !


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Voted For: untouchablekilla

killa gets this cos his structure was tight....and,honestly,as for me his punches hit way harder...both had a gd verse but killas verse was much more interessting...his wordplay was cool too7/10...and his lines werent stretched lik abberant's...holla

Voted For: untouchablekilla

This was one of the closest battles ever, but here's how it goes down:

Flow ~ This was pretty much even (even though the "get up on this rap shit" to "like chin-ups from a fat chick" was fuckin' wicked structure)

Personals ~ Aberrant definitely had the "killed without touch" thing to the highest... Vote to Aberrant.

Multies ~ Untouchablekilla...

Vocab ~ Pretty much even, but vote went to Untouchable... Close as shit though...


Vote ~ Untouchable Killa...





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Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouchable had this by far.....

ill renegade and rent a blade basically diminish your existence
kill you and win this gay ass battle before i finish a sentence

10/10
that ripped aberrant..

if tha game was ya dick, you couldnt get up on this rap shit
youll never surpass my bars like chin-ups from a fat-chick

6/10
Not a good verse


This dawg had visions of a win, but it was just a dream
aberrant only comes hard with asain porn and masturbation cream
9/10
that shit made me crack up lmao!

post ur rhymes next to mines and the truth of whack-ness will reflect
cause if u wrote ur punches on lego blocks, they still wouldn’t connect
8/10
plain verse but good..

connectin ya wit my final strike to leave ya in broken segments
if 1 line will fuck this bitch up then a verse will leave him pregnant

10/10
that shit was good...

Total:43

abberant.......

Your "wastin paper" writin down ya "uneconomical" lyrics
You couldnt structure somethin "explosive" if you were studyin "atomic" physics!!
9/10
That owned untouchablekilla

Come on, face the reality, your misty like water vapour
You couldnt write somethin hot if we set alight your fuckin paper!!
4/10

Not a good verse..


Ive caught this cunt off guard, leavin him battered, bruised and scarred
You couldnt "book" a place near me even if you owned a "library" card!!
7/10
that shit cracked me up...

Right, imma flip ya name and complete the process by changin the "tense"
*"killed" without touch* seems to make a lot more sense!!
5/10
plain and simple..



So im done, your merked, i just spat raps scripture
Like a winning bid at an auction.... sucka, you got the picture!!
8/10
Owned j00 untouchable..

Total:33

V/ UntouchableKilla

omg upppin@!!!!!!!!!

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fuck dis verse was good... i aint gonna vote cuz no one returns da favor so i'll leave feed back on this guy's jus to say that this was a dope peice homie...ever wanna join ma crew check it... but you betta have some wins...