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[.:Diabolic:.] vs sHoTTaBoY
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Have Fun Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 01:38 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for asking for votes by posting in forums: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149342 |
[.:Diabolic:.] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 01:12 PM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 01:12 PM.
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Nigguh U Claim You From The ''Ghetto Of Bmore''...
Broke Bitch U Bouncin On Cock Like A ''See-saw''.. I Asked If U Want ''War'' U Was Speechless n Complained Of ''LockJaw''... Ya Rhymes Are ''Diabolical'' n That Brands You A ''Herb'' By The Rap ''LAW'' Nigguh In This ''Text'' Battle Thers No Possible Way U Can Run n ''Hide''.. ...I Suggest U Insert The ''Clip'' n Resort To ''Suicide''... ..I'm Too Lyricall Complex An U Need Help So Its Time To ''Decide'' Are U Gonna Take A Peice From All Ya Battles An ''Devide'' InTo One Or U Gon Get Ya Boys n See If Ya ''Minds'' Really Do ''KOLLIDE''...! |
He Has A ''Clip'' An Gun In His Avy Thats What The ''Suicide'' Line Was About..
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yo.....
This is "all real",lyrics get "Pitch Black" easy defeat you simply "feeble minded" thats why your lyrics "depleat" you claim discreet, your record shows that your inscrutable Its unusual, cuz newbs dont even see ya lyrics as usable your mouth is insulated, unable to release heated verbs wont emerge, your speakin in your own code, your unheard wont be "blessed" if your society status was "clergy" live by your "avatar", this boy bout to "beg for mercy" you follow false statements, neva "shot-a-boy" lost fella confused, becuz you assume you can win from tossed letters |
Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]
...Nice Battle To Both Emcees...
] [.:Diabloic:.] - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 8/10 sHoTTaBoY - Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... Quit wit tha caps... 7.5/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Upppin
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up......................
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Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]
gud verse.kinda ok but not great,beta not worse than shottas and did u like to eat his verse and its gud |
What A Bullshit Vote That Is..........
Get That Shit Removed.... No Explanation? She Just Got Sumthin Against Me..... |
yea...i dont cheat...
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I Never Said U Cheat, I'm Sayin That Shit Was A Bullshit Vote, U Know If It Was The Othe Way Round U Wouldnt Be Happy..
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omg......that means get it removed......
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
well this is a tight battle hard to choose but im going with shotta he had better stucture and witch stucture points out what yer trying to say a lil better and he had some alright vocab but i dont think he gets my vote for that shotta had some dope punches tho and this aint no hate vote honest i dont want beef i dont like it (diobalic): punches: shotta vocab: diobalic wordplay: shotta metas: shotta multi's: diobalic opener: diobalic closener: shotta flow: no need for this in a text battle stucture: shotta vote and more enjoyed/ ShottaBoi return the favour in one of my battles in my sig and vote honest :laugh: |
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