d. cepth shun vs Mc *MaZe*
 

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No Recycling
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Check in by: 09-12-04 at 03:10 PM

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Mc *MaZe* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:40 PM.

look at dis lil punk ass d. cepth shun
wen u see me online it is best to fuckin run
click the log out thing, shut the internet down
u wana battle me wen im the one with the crown
look,u must b dumb or are u smokin crack?
this crown is mine and aint no one gettin it back
because im just too good at doin wot i do
and wiv a name like dat your bound to get slew

(slew = boid off)

D. Cepth Shun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 02:56 PM.

watch this kid get lost, like playing a hard Maze
and its like high force winds the way this fag sways
ima eat M&M up in fully cos this bastards bite sized
MC can't figure a coin trick he he was Genius wised
ecery time Maze comes in a battle he tends to Reck-less
cos he keeps ducking battles no wonder hes neck-less

done in 3 mins
now let people vote
My shit was keyed

ayo!
 

yo shit was not keyed dont try it

a coin trick he he was (1 he will do,people aint gonna notise you more f you double your letters)

ecery time Maze (im no expert but i think you ment to say every??)

check yo shit b 4 you submit!!! thats wat i allways say mother fucker!

cmon ppl vote up

uppppiiiiinnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! :shoot: :shoot: :thefinger

This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
 

checkin it out

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

watch this kid get lost, like playing a hard Maze
and its like high force winds the way this fag sways
^^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCH HOMIE

ima eat M&M up in fully cos this bastards bite sized
MC can't figure a coin trick he he was Genius wised
^^^^^^^^^ KINDA A PUNCH BUT ITS OK

ecery time Maze comes in a battle he tends to Reck-less
cos he keeps ducking battles no wonder hes neck-less
^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA MAYNE

look at dis lil punk ass d. cepth shun
wen u see me online it is best to fuckin run
^^^^^^^^ BOOOOOOOOOOOO

click the log out thing, shut the internet down
u wana battle me wen im the one with the crown
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT WEAK PUNCH DER MAYNE WEAK

look,u must b dumb or are u smokin crack?
this crown is mine and aint no one gettin it back
^^^^^^^^^ OK WHERES DA PUNCHES MAYNE WEAK

because im just too good at doin wot i do
and wiv a name like dat your bound to get slew
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT WEAK CLOSA MAYNE

YO SHUN HAD AN WEAK VERSE BUT SOME OF DA PUNCHES WERE A LIL BETTA DAN MC.MAZE VERSE

MAZE WORK ON YO PUNCHES U HAVE A LIL FLOW MAYNE WORK ON DEM PUNCHES HIT HARD NEXT TIME

V-D.CEPTH SHUN RETURN DA FAV

fuck you nigga
 

ayo u only voted dis lil bitch hear coz he sed dis:

Vote on my battles: I will always return the favor

i was nuff better dan dis lil bitch and u all know it man

that vote shouldnt have bin allowed man and you shouldnt say shit like dat u lil punk

u only win battles coz u say to people ill vote for you if you vote for me u fuckin faggot get the fuck off this site nigga

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

D. Cepth Shun he came wayyy harder so he gets my vote his flow and punches were just simply better

v/D. Cepth Shun

Mc Maze Do U Want To Prove To Me Dat Ur Betta Dan Me Mayne And Matta Of Fact I Didnt Get A Win Yet Lol

Call Me A Punk Hmmmmmm Lets Go Kid Or U Quick To Back Down

Even Untouch Says It Ur Wack Accept Yo Wack Rap Gene U Live By It Keep It And Carry It On

Fuckin Herb

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

rrrrriiiiiittttteeeeee....dis battle needs alil work...i aint even gna give the usual breakdown

D. - weak verse...very simple, no creativeness, no meta4s, useless wordplay, punches didnt hit hard, corny personal, and it sounded like u was just rhymin just to rhyme

MC - what can i say...^^^^^ THE EXACT SAME THING !!!!!

all n all i have to give this verse to D.Cepth Shun because although both verses were weak...his punches were SLIGHTLYYYYYY harder n direct...MC was just gasin himself in half the battle...iight


Vote - D.Cepth Shun


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