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Lightnin' vs InsaneJoka666
Battle Rules:
6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 07:17 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
hello are you gonna accept or decling!!
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Lightnin' has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 06:56 PM.
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InsaneJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:02 PM.
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Sorry it took me a sec to accept/
Everyone tryna take me out, what do you expect/ I am on top like Hov in 04/ Ya'lls gettin jealous, tryna settle scores/ You speak out ya lips like you think that you hard/ Nigga what you know about life behind bars/ What do you know about prison, like you dead and been risen/ Cause I kill emcees, I shoot lines wid precision/ My neck is iced from runnin streets and slangin coke/ Ya neck is iced from hummin meats and bangin jokes/ You say yous insane what you know about loco/ Sure I'll hit you wid spanish, I speak dat un poco/ Arriba vato, tu es un bandejo/ Why are you dead, nigga cause I say so/ Oaktown is the realest, even Game feel us/ Ya'lls hear my lines and you all wanna steal us/ But the fact of the matter is we killas and yous bitches/ I coulda got signed but I turned down the riches/ My life is filled wid crime but its mine so ride pine/ You stupid lil bitch tryna take a bite outa mine?/ I got heat for you haters and toast for you fools/ I play wid gats, black and decker is ya tools/ So niggas sing welcome back like I'm famous then/ But you suck more dick, then Jenna Jameson/ |
Lighnin' your bars stinks it’s like you’re housing the poor...
You know Joka will leave two holes in you like the year 2004... keep books on more shelfs; you wanna battle me, or just talk to yourself?... Im smashing your barz quick then lighning .. call me super man... cuz your just another newb thinking they can tak me down... just another fan... Like i just got ripped by Insanejoka five to Zero..Like totally he's my Hero like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts... so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz... its no coincidence, the ruler is giving you an L in your face WOW perfect fit... its a worthy cause, cuz am giving you the loss, am makin you earn every inch of it .. lol quick ass key |
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
joka i gotta give it to u cause you followed the rules plus your was more complex and better flow. punchs were so so and the mults was hot. shoulda put some wordplays in there |
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
i was expect'n this one , you had him word play, meta's punches, personals, structure was a lil eh but its the drop that counts and you dropped hot lightnin your drop was alright, rhymes were alittle 2 basic for me, but your jus not on the level of this cat no hate though i got my ass handed to me to one sided, but nice drop from both vote//Insanejoka666 |
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
InsaneJoka666- Your verse was good even tho it was shorter then his but it was still good and it was way better too...your punches were good too...some werent connecting but then there were some that did...your structure overall was good...so overall you got this battle with a better verse and better punches... Lightnin- your verse was longer but wasnt better...your punches werent hitin hard thats the reason you lost really...some sucked and some just didnt hit hard enough...your structure was good...but overall elevate on your punches n shit.... v/InsaneJoka666 |
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
Ok weqak battle... Joka....you bragged throughout your whole verse, not much directed at him but it was creative. Lightin'...I thought you'd attack him but u followed him and bragged throughout too. Flow: Joka Structure: Joka Punches: Tie Personals: Tie Creativity: Joka: Didn't have much to go on, so couldn't really comment much but joke got it. Vote: Joka |
This was feedback posted for Lightnin'
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Voted For: InsaneJoka666
OPENOR=INSANE PUNCHES=INSANE VOCAB=N/A METAS=INSANE MULTIS=NONE IIGHT THIS WAS A EASY WIN INSANE TOOK THIS HIS PUNCHES WAS HARDER N THA STRUCTURE WAS OK.. LIGHTNIN HAHA I DUNNO MAYN U WAS DOIN OK TILL U STARTED SPEAKIN SPANISH ELIVATE N STAY WITH 1 LANGUAGE |
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