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Crossword 09-12-04 07:41 PM

White Picket Fences
 
This is structured to be a song. That is why i actually rhyme and its not too much of a story like my poems are.

I didn't want to have to hide myself inside this again.
I didn't want to run when this serenity was building.
Circumstances override any chances of my movement.
As i creep and cloak myself underneath your delusion.

I try and find the crease in my twisted mind
Perfectly chisled shell, wrapped around suicide
A minion controlled by his dark symphonies
I sit myself in this corner and inhale this into me

Why do i create such a false perception
Why do i drive myself to let this get in
Paranoia infects and inspires all my senses
But i keep this hidden behind my white picket fences

fluidmoon 09-12-04 08:46 PM

wow, i liked this poem a lot, it seemed dark, and deeper then what you wrote, i can relate to this on so many different levels,and i just liked your wording as well, nice poem

Ice Pick 09-15-04 05:28 PM

This was short and fucking ILL

i loved the pic you painted with this shit, felt it was real sinister in my mind, i wish it was longer and it would have been 10 times better, i would like to see some more shit of yours......

10ne


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