Random Assasination
 

theres a point in time where mine and ur path's crossed/
When I thought about layin you out with my bare paw/
I dont need no weapons I jus need these brickz/
Wanna role on my crew dawg you gotta go through Fickz/
We get in the ring, I drop you like Ali did Forman/
So you reduce to makin grills and doin car commercial supportin-/
Ya old reputation as a number one nigga to get the job done/(duuunn)
You kiddin'? I been hittin the thin line of livin for an adrenaline rush/(ruuush)
Now I am the assasin and your the prey/
Been pickin through your body with axes and clay/
Stick a genade in your oven so when you awake--/
theres 3-dozen body parts floatin in a bloody lake/
Been doin it clean but there's at time to get ill/
Run up in a niggaz house kill him and bury him in a feild/
Theres a time and a place for verbal vaccination/
Until I see you watch for your random assasination/
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not my best but I am jus tryin to get posts and feedback, I will hit ya'll a little harder next time.

pretty decent read... you had okay structure but for open mics it would be best not to // put those lines to end your lines..anyways you had some okay wordplay..decent mutlies...overall keep it up and elevate