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PlaTinuM_ vs InsaneJoka666
Battle Rules:
6 -10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 10:20 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 09:50 PM.
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InsaneJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 09:51 PM.
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ITZ ON
Bust your shyt b-fo u pull back, B-fo u accept ima give u a bytch Slap/ Take your shyt in tha gay barz fucka,You Workin da cornerz fo me Sucka/ Ahh fuck wat u sayin,Ima grad ma shyt to ya face n start sprayin/ You cant stand to me nigga cause u get killed,Nigga ya boyz callin out n they know u dead now they Thrilled/ So you down wit one of tha best Crewz,Bytch get down n start cleanin ma Shoes/ Comin first ima give u a pennie fo a pay of da Week,Ima add some shyt to ma winnin Streak/ You startin to get cocky datz why u left Dead,Your bytch cryin fo u but im get her in ma Bed/ Just to get her more into been Happy,Now dat she happy she thinkin your dick iz juz Crappy/ Take your sorry down in tha 6-6-6,Ima start playin around wiot ya into ma own trix/ Dont eva disrespect me nigga,Next time ima do somethin to ya fam wit ma trigga/ |
you winnin is dim,like partially sighted people playin Football ya no contest..
i rip my opponents with ease, spittin xtreme,im on a one man conquest.. i got this pussy beggin for mercy on his knees...While im Smoking them Tree's... who's this whack emcee easin tha words like a verbal laxative... in this battle you'll get 'smoked' in the open like cops to herbal activists with my 'fuses' lit i aim to 'blow up' an spit sick... even "chewin up a dictionary" this bitch couldnt flow like this an spit well worded scripts ... i melt this virgins grip in this..like unwanted mail ya quickly ripped-up.... hit you hard in tha face so many times, you'll get ya mouth stitched up"... by the time you read this his time has paste...cuz im rippin thi bitch Sick and Fast... quick key since me girls callin im out pz. good luck |
uppin for some votez, yo come on yall get some votez in hurr!
ill return tha favour |
uppin will return the favor can we close this quick
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dont get any dick riderz in here, uppin for some votez cmon yall i wanna close diz quik
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Voted For: InsaneJoka666
vote to insane joker cuase his shit had thought and skill. shot bro your shit was ill Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thankz uppin for some more votes...................will return the favor
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Voted For: InsaneJoka666
wow uhh....close battle...sike lol well fo real this is a one-sided battle structure:I.J. mos def flowL: IJ punches:IJ wordplay:IJ OOO ration: lol IJ this was and explained vote i REALLY read each other's verse twice ~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: InsaneJoka666
Weak battle y'all Breakdown for Insane: you winnin is dim,like partially sighted people playin Football ya no contest.. i rip my opponents with ease, spittin xtreme,im on a one man conquest.. Set up was nice but punch killed it 5/10 i got this pussy beggin for mercy on his knees...While im Smoking them Tree's... who's this whack emcee easin tha words like a verbal laxative... in this battle you'll get 'smoked' in the open like cops to herbal activists 3 line punch not great idea but it was creative 6/10 with my 'fuses' lit i aim to 'blow up' an spit sick... even "chewin up a dictionary" this bitch couldnt flow like this an spit well worded scripts ... Blah weak 4/10 i melt this virgins grip in this..like unwanted mail ya quickly ripped-up.... hit you hard in tha face so many times, you'll get ya mouth stitched up"... Very weak not even apunch 3/10 by the time you read this his time has paste...cuz im rippin thi bitch Sick and Fast... One line closer weak 3/10 Overall: 21/50 Breakdown for platinum...... Bust your shyt b-fo u pull back, B-fo u accept ima give u a bytch Slap/ Take your shyt in tha gay barz fucka,You Workin da cornerz fo me Sucka/ Weak not even a punch 2/10 Ahh fuck wat u sayin,Ima grad ma shyt to ya face n start sprayin/ You cant stand to me nigga cause u get killed,Nigga ya boyz callin out n they know u dead now they Thrilled/ What kinda structure is that? no punch 1/10 So you down wit one of tha best Crewz,Bytch get down n start cleanin ma Shoes/ Comin first ima give u a pennie fo a pay of da Week,Ima add some shyt to ma winnin Streak/ What? again not even a punch a lil wordplay 3/10 You startin to get cocky datz why u left Dead,Your bytch cryin fo u but im get her in ma Bed/ Just to get her more into been Happy,Now dat she happy she thinkin your dick iz juz Crappy/ U can't be serious...1/10 Take your sorry down in tha 6-6-6,Ima start playin around wiot ya into ma own trix/ Dont eva disrespect me nigga,Next time ima do somethin to ya fam wit ma trigga/ Ok dat was wack, an again no punch..courtesy number 2/10 Overall: 9/50 Both was weak but plat u really gotta elevate man, read a tutorial on punchlines an personals cuz I ono what u dropped. Vote: Insane |
god can we get some votes in here drop a link and ill return the favor
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This was feedback posted for InsaneJoka666
checkin this out
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Voted For: InsaneJoka666
InsaneJoka- your verse oh damn your verse was nice as fuck i mean nice...your punches were nice too they all hit hard too...there didnt seem to be any weak ones...your structure was good too didnt have really any long lines, plus was easy to read too...overall you got my vote for better verse and way better punches... Platinum- your verse was aight...but good job on it...your punches were decent but some just didnt seem to hit hard enough and most werent better then insanejokas...your structure was decent but should fix it up a little overall just elevate kid... v/InsaneJoka.... |
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