upping from... a galaxy far far away

Hehe dis one was also pretty phat flow, i give u props for the use of yo vocabulary, and you kept it goin. Straight up dissed his ass hah, nice flow dawg.

Peace

This seemed to be a constructive diss with mounts of wordplay and punches thrown... The rhythm was working throughout and a good use of multies helped smoothen the flow, more internal rhymes would help... Liked the wordplay throughout, punches were well thought, some of em funny, vocab was half decent, more knowledge words could have been used to show a different side, but mos def you come through with what you had to... Some of it was simplistic and tedious to read, the quicc rhymes were always working, prolly work in audio... Liked this, it was decent throughout... Keep spitting, see your skill, look like a battler more then anything...

Peez...