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NoMercy 09-13-04 03:37 AM

NoMercy vs Turban
 
Battle Rules:

10 linez max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
And bitch please!

remember Turban the towel head thats him the one im battling:laugh:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 03:37 AM

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System 09-13-04 08:20 PM

TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 08:20 PM.

TURBAN 09-13-04 08:29 PM

, bitch move son, callin me out when i'm offlineso yea heres my super quick drop




call me a towelhead?, you jus gave me verbal ammunition
you droppn is like a mute goin out for a american idol audition

this isnt a competion , you jus a bitch looking for reognition
you can drop all you want , your bout as hot as new edition

your like a new rash all you is , is an irritation
your easier to figure out than fuck'n addition,

to me basically you a floormat i walk all ova ya
stop bitch'n kid, i think u need to adjust ya bra

i looked your name up in the dictionary , the definition
no mercy-zero opposition, about to be outa commission

System 09-13-04 08:51 PM

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 08:51 PM.

NoMercy 09-13-04 08:53 PM

Turban ahs weak “pathetic” rhymes he try to much but cant “profect-it”/(1)
I was thinking he would “pussy” out when I post up the battle, it was kinda like I thought he would “reject-it”/.(2)
This mo fo thinking he rolls with a “million” dollars in his pocket/(3)
but naw ill be the one to “drop” him in a hole with my “punch” and a certain tool called a “socket”/.(4)
Im to fast for this fuckin goof now “pucker-up” and try and fit in with the way I “accelerate”/(5)
Think you can have a party over your lose haha(laugh) that’s up sane and “hilarious” to me to have you “celebrate”/.(6)
Im gonna make you “remember” me as the young cat that blew yer mind with a tun of “rejection”/(7)
Killed you with my “lyrics” and audio now you slow to win in dis “election”/.(8)
I was the first ever to spell out my name and wreck yer “future”, cuz when I spit I light up all the “candles”/(9)
Ill be sittin down on a rusty chair “watchin” my friend take you out fast cuz hes good at that with his style of “manhandles”/.(10)

Louis Vuitton 09-13-04 08:58 PM

Voted For: TURBAN

aight aight ,see'n ya to bitches is beef'n or some shit, but i'ma go wit dis kid right here, he kept it simple the rhym'n was actually rhym'n no mercy , iw as feel'n ya shit but it was sooooo stretched out i mean seriously nigga, , but yea turban had a solid , structure, and solid punches, sounds like u annoy'n dis cat haha, but yea a couple spell'n errors on turbans side, made ait a bit to hard to read but i was still feel'n his drop


punches// turban
flow//turban

meta's//no mercy
structure// turban
word choice // turban

turban kept it straight da entire time i thought

nice drop by both...

vote //turban

young_buckshot 09-13-04 08:59 PM

Voted For: TURBAN

yeah you win bro no mercy is wack yo cant see his rymes just no flow he just made me be like wtf!!!!! probs turban
peace yall

Immense 09-13-04 09:16 PM

Voted For: NoMercy

aight......nomercy...lines wer a lil stretched...but ya worked it well..some nice punches...and vocab...used ya wordplay well....u deffo got skill fo yo age...u came strong when ya battled me too...keep elavatin kid.....

turban...not bad...but i think mercy a lil too strong for ya...u came well..liked how u had the multies...just need to work on ya punches..u cud get good...decent battle tho....

my vote=nomercy

return the favour wit an honest vote in my battle please...its in ma sig

Immense 09-13-04 09:19 PM

and yer......nomercys rhymes wer way stretched..........but if u not dumb...ya can work round tht....try to see it how he was seein it..get into his flow...then ya can see the punches an stuff...wich were alot stronger........but mercy man...ya need to bring those lines down a lil......or structure it different...cos if kids cant follow it properly thye aint gon feel it..........jus positive feedback right there

and turban...u just need to work on wordplay and punches...which are the most important............pz

NoMercy 09-13-04 10:00 PM

^yo thanks and ya i kno my lines are streched that how you're sposto do text so were yours when we battled but were like the same but trojan you had better punches and wordplay in are battle thats why you won and ya
U P P I N.............

Nynth Degree 09-13-04 10:27 PM

This was feedback posted for TURBAN
 
I'm not voting on this, I just wanna see who voted...

lil C.A.L.I 09-13-04 10:41 PM

Voted For: TURBAN

i vot for u cuz u got good punches10/10 and your rhyme was coo 8/10 and your shit sounds coo

NoMercy 09-13-04 10:50 PM

^wtf haha for now on im makin the postes to vote 200 on most battles!
and uppin

I.D. 09-13-04 10:55 PM

Voted For: NoMercy

NoMercy took this probly only cuz he had more time idk maybe he jus plain sicker then Turban who knowz but in this battle he has better flow turban had better punchez nomercy realli didn't have wordplay but still gettin my vote but better structure 2 outta 3 winz it

NoMercy 09-13-04 11:00 PM

^explan that a bit better next time and i only had 5 min to write that song ya it sucks but explan better next time and ya peace
o and U P P I N


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