lil rip vs Spektikul
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

1 Day to Check in, 60 min to drop
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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 01:09 PM

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Lil Rip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 01:59 PM.

yo.........
warm up off roses
i know you like to think your flows are sick\ but look a little closer and see that all you spit is bull-shit ya

my verse

yo look i'll take you ass smoke you like a blunt let my nigga hit it// take your flows eat them digest it and shit it// cause your flow ain't tight they lose like your mom// stretch pussy call that why we call that bitch louie armstrong// ya that right we fuck her right till it hurt// then drop her like a hand ful of dirt// put her to work, and you know what worst// that when you kiss your mom my dick was there first// but fuck you and that bitch ass hoe// and please tell her to stop changing her lipstick cause shes changing my dick into a rainbow//

This kat sucks so bad, i dont even know where to get started
How'd you come up with your name, was it inspired when you farted
your retared, Id win a battle with you, even if I walked out
I record my wins, you keep track of how much you been knocked out
whats the "lil" in your name short for, prolly "Losing Is Life"
Words are definatly weapons, but yours aint even a butter knife
You been here since February, I thought your rap skillz would be classic
But with seventeen losses, looks like you've been getting your ass-kicked
Rapverse is a website, and "a new journey to dopeness"
You should just quit now, cause for you its lookin hopeless
And while your gone, maybe you could actually learn how to rhyme
LiL "RIP" can "Rest In Peace", cause he just got "ripped" for the 18th time...

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 02:31 PM.

This kat sucks so bad, i dont even know where to get started
How'd you come up with your name, was it inspired when you farted
your retared, Id win a battle with you, even if I walked out
I record my wins, you keep track of how much you been knocked out
whats the "lil" in your name short for, prolly "Losing Is Life"
Words are definatly weapons, but yours aint even a butter knife
You been here since February, I thought your rap skillz would be classic
But with seventeen losses, looks like you've been getting your ass-kicked
Rapverse is a website, and "a new journey to dopeness"
You should just quit now, cause for you its lookin hopeless
And while your gone, maybe you could actually learn how to rhyme
LiL "RIP" can "Rest In Peace", cause he just got "ripped" for the 18th time.....

my verse was so good I thought i'd post it twice, lol, uppin...

Uppin for honest votes ya'll, please don't sleep..

Voted For: Spektikul

no doubt...spektikul killed that poser-ass rapper...everything about his verse was better than lil' rip's...KEEP DOING IT BIG!

Thanks dawg, uppin for more honest votes...

Voted For: Spektikul

this was one sided....

flow spek * much easyer to follow
punches: spek cuz he actully tryed and made more sense
creativeness: spek cue he put time and effort in it N focus

You been here since February, I thought your rap skillz would be classic
But with seventeen losses, looks like you've been getting your ass-kicked

^^ ha funny personal..

Rapverse is a website, and "a new journey to dopeness"
You should just quit now, cause for you its lookin hopeless

^^ decent...

Voted For: Spektikul

lmfao....kinna funny battle.....

iight...lemme break it down honestly:

lil rip...your verse was off...u was spitting about his mom i mean...wdf..u battling him not hs mum u shuda focused on him...got it?.....ur closer was tight tho...but ur flow was wack and you punches didnt hit...no personals no wordplay....u gatta work a lil more on ya shit...


spektikul...your verse was a lil better....atleast u had harder punches which were directed to him and not his mum...and u had a better flow even tho ur lines were just a lil stretched..gd wordplay and your opner was tight too...gd job


holla at my battle with intensify effect plz....thanx

peace

Voted For: Spektikul

Vote: Spektiful

Lyrics: Spek
opening: Spek.....nice....when he farted lol
Ending:Spek, punch and personal
Punches: Speks were better...rip came wit lame ass mum crap all way thru and wats louis armstrond ( great jazz playa) got neting 2 do wit dat line...
Personals: Spek
Flow: Spek
Structure: tied

Overall: Spek easily for a mo sophisticated rhyme

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 

Spektikul won this u both have to up ur game but the other guy was shit and talking bout speks mom wasnt helping hima t all

Voted For: Spektikul

dang spektikul u merked him beyond belief. punches- spek, flow- spek, structure- spek, personals- spek, multis- no one. lil rip your structure was bad, work on that, your punches were weak, all bout him mom, thats kinda played out. flow wuz aight, but no personals. Spek nice punches, good structure, good flow, good personals, aight opener, awsome closer. Wordplay was good 2.
"whats the "lil" in your name short for, prolly "Losing Is Life"
Words are definatly weapons, but yours aint even a butter knife" haha nice. wordplay+punch+personal= KO
"but fuck you and that bitch ass hoe// and please tell her to stop changing her lipstick cause shes changing my dick into a rainbow//" funny, played out, but funny. v/Spektikul. return the favor. peace