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some played punches but overall i liked it,was a bit short though....
but ya gotta agree wit ya opinion mostly...lmao at trash droppers

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149301

this was iight ..pretty short read.... some punchlines like daz were really played...structure was good..and i liked it but i didnt like the orange font...overall nice drop...alittle short...but keep it up nice

word joka means alot comen from you bein a vet on here an one of tha best on origanal uppin...

Definatly shows potential bro.. Good shit.


The wordplay was pretty dope.

thankz.......uppin

numerous verbal shots to tha head extract your "lobe"
this kid couldnt "cprogress" in tha win colum if he was "mod"
/\ the way i say it...don't rhyme

cut holes in this kids style like a "c-section"
tear his eyeballs out an put em in my mic so he can "see perfection"
/\ flow a lil off

i'll get inside his head and interact with his "brain" "cell's"
this kid couldnt have a decent flow if he "drained" "well's"
/\ if i drained a well there would be no flow so u shoulda worded it better

screw tha punches tha personal's are "irellivent"
name'n your selves shottaboy an gangstarshit lmfao how "intelligent"
/\ ok closer but the 2nd line again coulda been better

rofl gang you have no idea i wouldnt expect u to understand it fuckin hoe...