mc-bad-boy vs philly
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-20-04 at 04:26 PM

Must drop verse in 10000000 minutes after check in.

Philly has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 06:15 PM.

The flow so sick not even carnivores wanted beef with me//
Me being compared to you wouldnt even happen in a pac analogy//
I rip all rappers in shreds and pieces ive killed more black rappers then the aids disese//
You bet in me this precious time of moment is nothing but a make belive//
You might need jack and jill and climb a fucking bean stock//
Because im crossing you out like the logo im reeboks//

mc-bad-boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 02:46 PM.

yo wacko imma win dis battle with my dope rhyms//
ill punch this basterd till he fall even it it takes all the times//
basterd cant split 1 rhyme he cant even hit me weak hes so crap//
hes so poor and he cant get a fuck so he has to kid napp//
hes erhymes r wack lyk his face hes a discrise to the human race//
i kickd is ass hes movin outta town hes cryin while packin his suitcase//

Voted For: Philly

IIGHT PHILLY TOOK THIS BECUS HE HAD SOME PUNCHLINES
MC URS DIDNT MAKE SENCE THAT MUCH BUT NO HATE

YALL STRUCUTRE WAS TIED
PHILLY HAD A KOO OPENOR

MAKE SENCE IN YA RHYMES MC AND HAVE HARDER PUNCHES

This was feedback posted for mc-bad-boy
 

lmfao old............................................... ............

Voted For: Philly

this was an 1-sided battle the whole way thru:
opener: philly
vocab: philly
structure: n/a
punches: philly
closer: philly
only philly won my vote cuz he came wit harder punches & wasn't wacker then mc bad-boy; both of y'all need 2 work on ur wordplay & get sum elevation in ur lines
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Philly

wow, pretty weak battle in my perspective

im goin to have to go with philly on this though...just because he came harder and his attempt at punches/personals were better...they were weak, but his attempt was better...gotta elevate man, think of more creative stuff, work with wordplay, both of yall need to get a flow happenin, and structure needs to improve, philly, finisher was probs your best line, had the right idea....next time, add some complexity, some personals, wird

same with you mcbadboy, you gotta elevate alot, punches were bitter....flow, was horrid, sorry man, that verse looks like you thought out in 2 min, then typed it in 30 seconds, so, just work on shit

v/philly

Voted For: Philly

both of you need to learn how to spell damnit.. but it was close

wack battle ....both your structures sucked .. your aid's comment was retarded but you still took this .... i liked that reeboks line that was bout it

philly took
opener
closer
meta
punches
personals

mbb took...
punches
personals
nothing else

winner over all..//Philly

return the favor check out my battle

Voted For: Philly

this is another battle of whose verse isnt as shit... cmon guys, its almost as if i can throw the line "my computer is red" and punch u both out... ha

STYLE:
i think u both couldve worded this shit a lot better, and can greatly benefit from just purely reading real lyrics, go check out www.ohhla.com n study several of ur favorite artists, especially u mc-bad-boy, i didnt have to check ur profile to know u werent more than a 12 yr old, theres nothing wrong wit being young, u just gota make up wit hard work, may i suggest 2 things: stay in school, and study Shyheim.

PUNCH:
i think this was more bitch-slapping than punching.
Philly started off aite, but i dont beleive jack n jiLL ever made it past that hiLL, let alone a damn bean stock... wasnt it some other dude who traded a cow or something, n the reeboks just sounded like a forced rhyme.
mc-bad-boy, 1st bar? not a punch at all. 2nd bar? coulda been worded a lot better. 3rd bar? played out line, whole line is predictable n couldve been worded better

FLOW:
i dont know whose was worse here guys, lines were stretched, no internal connection, just plain long sentences with any given word that rhymed with the preceding line.

TECHNIQUE:
ok, leme start wit mc-bad-boy, besides certain arguable slangs, if u can spell, u cant deliver a good punch: rhymes, bastard, "all the times?", spit, kidnap, his, like, disgrace"... this is close to being a piece of artwork, drawn with anything but english
Philly, u've got some potential creativity, this is where u edged ur opponent in this battle; however u both need to work on better rhymes, better personals, better multis, better everything

S: =tiE=
P: Philly > mc-bad-boy (slightly)
F: =tiE=
T: Philly > mc-bad-boy
OVERALL: Philly edged mc-bad-boy simply by writing english
VOTE: Philly, tho a part of me tells me i shouldnt vote for either