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DV8 09-13-04 07:02 PM

DV8 vs Ill-Grammatix
 
Battle Rules:....... ....:CREW BATTLE:....
.............................Ill-Grammatix (KK)..VS DV8 (MK)....
10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r votes..no hate votes..if votes are not explain they will be
..................disqaulified,honest n explained votes will be returned,
this is a crew battle if you do not except,you will be dq'd...
read the rules/line limit/n drop time........goo'luck ill'g.....

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 07:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Ill-Grammatix 09-14-04 03:09 PM

yo... when you say lines do mean actual lines or bars... how the hell you do a verse w/ 15 lines?... one of ya lines won't have a line coupled with it

System 09-14-04 03:28 PM

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 03:28 PM.

Ill-Grammatix 09-14-04 03:50 PM

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell (lmao)
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's" (lol)
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do (ctfu)
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!


line 3: one of his first posts was a mock batle verse asking for feedback..lol
everything else should be obvious...one

Yo, GL on this shyt, D.

System 09-14-04 08:28 PM

DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:28 PM.

DV8 09-14-04 08:29 PM

Ya lines waste space n shit, ya Konsept's laced wit distaste, I displace n erase your hits,
Your styles basic, ya only spit ill with grammar when lick’n disease infested novelists clits,
herb your trash, you write words i laugh, you phat? .not even when writing on obese hips,
fuck your scripts, you hot? you wouldnt even spit fire if i was lighting grease on ya lips,
you wanna go toe 2 toe? you betta be pissin cyphillis in butt ta match my sick ass flow,
ya record shows you lack blows,ya most accomplished wins from a chick dat no-showed,
i must adress your a mess,you honestly give new meaning to the word to meaning-less,
im not sure whats more pathetic.!..,your text of ya crew being led by a fuckin princess,
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
ILL's GRAMMA punches like TIX, so my hits'll leave him in knots like little kids shoe laces,
get a grip and take ya trip, cause you don't pack a punch like hawaiin drinks in suit cases,
your gay n strictly ass, youra dick dat wack n you aint in the army to be physical attacked,
its obvious your a fag, dats a skill you grasp, but you shoud really try stayin off that crack,
its fuckin obvious dude , but i know U don't have a clue, the only kastrophy in U're crew is U,
U're pussy, in a crew full of fems, that explains why you have momma in your name 2,
who you mad at, your jus a army brat that try's ta pass bad spits as effective static,
its tragic, cause you could'nt even drib-ill (dribble) lethal spits if your name was magic,

Ill-Grammatix 09-14-04 08:42 PM

good shyt yo... thoughtyou had writers block?...lol

DV8 09-14-04 08:49 PM

lol.i did thats why it took me like i think 2 hrs ta write it.....
i was gettin pissed off to...but ya good verse..

Lickity-Spit 09-14-04 08:49 PM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
OOO FIYA LINEZ.. good spit by both... u rep the crew well D

DV8 09-14-04 11:41 PM

uppin 4 some votes n ill return them..............

DV8 09-15-04 12:50 AM

vote .................................................. ......

fluidmoon 09-15-04 02:16 AM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
haha, nice personals man, uppin for da crew.................

Ill-Grammatix 09-15-04 08:09 AM

i'll keep all comments to myself...lol.... can we get some honest votes here?... two hot verses waiting for a winner !

Ill-Grammatix 09-15-04 08:14 AM

hey man... we got 122 views and no votes... i think 400 posts may have been a bit much for front lines... elevated frontlines woulda been better for that many posts... most of these kats in FL are either noobs or don't know how to vote properly

the_crazy_one 09-15-04 09:24 AM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
damn you tore him a nkew one on this one dv you came harded and you jus left him hangin


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