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I Can I Cant/Hater
Im tired of people tellin me Solja you cant rap, ok i cant but my oozie's a doozie bitches watch out for that/ most people cant feel my battles and thats understandable, but when i prove them wrong they eat my spit like a twisted cannable/ im not from the school of hard knocks but i know how to box, and im not a boxer but i know how to hit you wit a sock filled wit rocks/ i am alwase cold but i can spit fire at liers, i dont kill but i can murder people wit there girls bra wires, and i dont muder for hire i murder to get higher, and my code name is sire battle me and the concequences are dire/ i can cum but i cant go, (to sleep) i cant battle but i can flow/ i got great context but its not very complex/ im great at topicals but bad at front lines, i can fuck a bitch but i cant find the dimes/ i can run fast but i got bad shoes, i flow good but only when i got the blues/ Interlude change of context:Rage.......directed at Issac Martinez (A Hater) :shoot: you a bitch that dont know shit about music, the only life you have is in your rhyme book and you dont use it/(he has no life) you couldent beat my shit, (jack me off) if you paid me so you could suck my dick/ you a nobody and its soon to be known, the only bone you get is when your alone/ your best friends your right hand and you would use you left, but you did it to much and got carpotunnel and your lip got cleft/ In front of a crowd you choke you fake you wannabe dope, you cant think straight like when you masterbate cant get rid of ya soap..............Peayce |
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you suck man haha
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yer 2nd verse was the best in the whole song and it was still bad :laugh: i would school you
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but im not battling you cuz i dont battle net style yet just checkin out how good people are:) then see:)
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Fuck you if i were to see your noobie ass on the streets....i would beat your face in........your a hater so dont expect any props from anyone on this site you bitch....
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you cocksucker I would kill you in a topical......but you to pussy to do it Mr. "i dont battle net style"........you lil kid go through puberty then talk shit, talkin bout "i would school you" finish school then say that what are you in like 6th grade?..........lil shit i bet you get picked on at school and have to take it out on everybody who dont know you........grow some facial hair and pop all those zits before you diss me....oh and by the way.......that topical is open when ever you feel like it.........Holla
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Uppin for feed back.....
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Uppin for feedback...............
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this was a pretty decent drop...
you had some nice feelings... good emotions... your structure was alittle off,, but i really recemed that you not use this// to end your lines it just make your verse look crampted up..other then that keep it up .. and elevate pz. |
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