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Assert Dominance- (No Comebacks) - SevenThird
3rd Audio in as many days........ Dissin D.I Game and JPoll -- Leave Feedback and Vote Hot if You feelin it.
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LMAO....is this a diss track to someone in particular? Lemme guess.
Anyway, not bad. A little different than what I'm used to from you. Nice punches and shit.....multis were cool. Seemed like your flow was rushed in a few spots. I don't know....it's a nice track, but it seems like you might have rushed this one a bit cause it doesn't seem as polilshed as some of your shit.. THERE'S HIS NAME!!!!! LOL Anyway, this would be like 100x better if you took like another hour to brush it up a bit cause I know what you are capable of.... Just so you know, I am in no way trying to say that you suck. I know how good you can be so I hold you to a higher standard than others on here. If this was just some random kid posting I'd probably tell him it was pretty good and to keep dropping more....lol |
lol /\/\ thats why I like ur feedback, you never let me off the hook :)
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DAMn!!..lol
Didnt kno ya'll going off on eachother.....DI is a homey so are you..but i see competition gettin betta and betta makes ya'll drop more sickness...shit this was cool yo....u rushed in this it seemed cuz u didnt take time as enygma said but overall nice drop |
hahahahaha damm 3verses u must really hate tha kid (i dont know u dun dun) so time to get it poppin.......................
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this shit was dope as usual seven, yo, DI, can't wait to hear what you got for him too, battle already......pz
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This Guy Spit-Shit I get-Sick-n'Hiccop-Break-fast/
You Dumb as reckless- DickHead- check ya fuckin-record/ Im the kinda guy who reminds lias why they-die-cold/ and I know Ya MindSlow like Dial-up-wit-lines-closed "This Kid Was Never Fiya- That's Why he ridin with spul" Fuck JPoll and Fuck Di- Aint No Games In here- I write a volume a day- For you a page takes a year/ Stay the fuck out my Threads- and keep my Balls outta Ya Palms-Bitch/ Before More A-Bombs Strike and form Mushroom Clouds all up-on-ya/ this whole thing was a quotable. unheard of. Sevens writtens cant be touched. Only crit is ya flow on the third verse was hella rushed, and you tried squeezin too much syllables on one line. But di got his ass handed, cant wait to see if he actually tries coming original and writes come punches to come back with. 1 |
Seven Dawg this was fya the beat worked perfectly wit the lyrics...all decent dawg keep that fya comin and keep it above the level on Die Game*
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i thoguth this shit was mad hot.. punches.. like woa... good stuff here man.. for real.. uppin
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The complexity of your lyrics was of the chain but your flow was off for the simple reason that you may not have been confortable wit what you wrote. But overall, very good diss track. The beat fitted well wit your topic.
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