Vango vs E Looch
 

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting SPECIALLY U :thumbup:
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Check in by: 09-14-04 at 03:14 PM

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E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 02:45 PM.

Vango has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 02:55 PM.

forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids
now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids
u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion
his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian
sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan*
callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan
holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin
when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin
if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game**
not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name***

no need for efort with u bitch bitin names an shit why u think i said specially u fuckin herb


*painter van gogh where he got his name
**won,now and his name was game tite,and i put tite game....get it?
***his name was like this...VanGo and now its Vango..... get it?

IF U DONT UNDERSTAND ANYTHING ELSE PLEASE DONT FUCKIN VOTE UNTILL U KNOW WHAT IS GOIN ON

OWNED

It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run
Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's
Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars
Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow
Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi
I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY"
So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY
I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy
Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss
While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss

Voted For: E Looch

Damn, this one was pretty much one-sided the whole way through. Vango, your punches didn't hit very hard, and you came with a weak closer. Also, you got quite hung up on personals, and that was your downfall. In my opinion you could've put more effort in to your drop. No hate though, keep doin' ya thing. Looch, sick drop all the way man, I understood it all this time lol. Ya wordplay was on point and your punches came pretty hard as well. I was feelin' that "fan" metaphor, about his punches "brezzin'" by, that was the highlight of your verse for me. Good shit.
Vote - E Looch

Return the favor with an honest explained vote, the link's in my sig...

p dizzle, battles are about punches and personals incase you didnt get the memo. hung up on personals huh, doesnt make much sense, oh well next vote.

^What I meant was you didn't focus too much on ya punches, sorry if that was unclear to you bro...

my list of people i beat contain people that beat u so that was lame

and a randy moss punch LMAO come on kid u got owned as predicted


uppin

Voted For: E Looch

haha dope battle both were good but it looks like vango didnt try his hardest in this battle but elooch did good

vango: nice verse nice drop overall you owned elooch in structure and ya flow was ok ya punhces didnt hit as hard as E and ya personals are ok bbut not your best verse

E: you had the upper hand with better punches that had hit hard and ya peronals were allso good ya verse was good and with wasnt as plian as vangos though vagos was iight

Vote is Elooch

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 

nice battle guys.....since I can't vote I was just trying to peep the progress :thumbup:

Voted For: Vango

Vango...
It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run
Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's
Like my name....but I dont understand the 1's
Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars
Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow
Dollars...swallow? RV money? weak...
Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi
I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY"
pretty plain personal...an he doesnt battle nobody's
So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY
I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy
lmao...froggish leap line
Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss
While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss
Bad wordplay and metiphore. ur not good sorry

forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids
now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids
Lil stretched. decent wordplay
u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion
his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian
killa flo...an vocab, in right context also
sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan*
callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan
nah...wak filla
holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin
when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin
nope...wak as well
if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game**
not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name***
Nice closer. Hard personals. an wordplay

Bad battle.
Voted E Looch.
2 good lines to none.

Switched

Voted for right person.
Posted Under wrong name.

Goin to get it fixed right now. Sorry.

sure carson seems like he would be a fair vote...........

Voted For: E Looch



It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run
Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's
^^aight,ok opener6/10
Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars
Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow
^^wasnt feelin it,5/10
Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi
I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY"
^^nice,7.5/10
So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY
I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy
^^lol..7.5/10
Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss
While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss
kinda weak closer,6.5/10

overall ok verse,was'nt all hard hiting punches but it was decent 32.5/50

forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids
now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids
^^nice opener,8/10
u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion
his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian
^^decent,7/10
sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan*
callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan
^^ok,7/10
holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin
when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin
^^ok,6.5/10
if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game**
not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name***
^^nice 9/10

overall 35.5/50

both were nice verses,props ta both,but looch had more content in his verse n originality with punches was deffinately evident,i got all the personals n punches but the best was looch's closer,nicely worded n delivered well,vango,most of your punches were played concepts..both had good flow n good structure nice battle...........

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