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MC Prephickz 09-14-04 06:57 PM

Lady Luck vs. Miss Kiss
 
Lately I've been sittin in my room.
With a pen and a pad thinkin of doom.
Lady luck has touched all these people.
And God has helped me stay away from this evil.
Then Miss Kiss came once when I was asleep.
Beat lady luck out and I woke up in this creek.
Ran back to my house to find my 3 dogs dead.
Next mornin came in and seen blood in my bed.
I was the victim of bad forutune and death while its bliss.
Thats what happens when ladyluck verses Miss Kiss.

(interpritation::: a kid Been battlin things for a while and finally they got to him, and the stress"Miss Kiss" beats out reality "Lady luck" and the boy ends up in a place he aint wanna be in)
my first piece of poetry in a while so gimme feedback. Holla, GOD BLESS!

badgurl3136 09-14-04 10:04 PM

nice drop...itz a good thing u told me who Miss Kiss waz cause when i waz reading it waz confusing the hell out of me! Who knowz...maybe i jus a dumbass! LOL good drop and keep it up!!

MC Prephickz 09-15-04 10:33 PM

thnx fa the feedback, and holla at me. UPPIN YA'LL^^^^^^^


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