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Lady Luck vs. Miss Kiss
Lately I've been sittin in my room.
With a pen and a pad thinkin of doom. Lady luck has touched all these people. And God has helped me stay away from this evil. Then Miss Kiss came once when I was asleep. Beat lady luck out and I woke up in this creek. Ran back to my house to find my 3 dogs dead. Next mornin came in and seen blood in my bed. I was the victim of bad forutune and death while its bliss. Thats what happens when ladyluck verses Miss Kiss. (interpritation::: a kid Been battlin things for a while and finally they got to him, and the stress"Miss Kiss" beats out reality "Lady luck" and the boy ends up in a place he aint wanna be in) my first piece of poetry in a while so gimme feedback. Holla, GOD BLESS! |
nice drop...itz a good thing u told me who Miss Kiss waz cause when i waz reading it waz confusing the hell out of me! Who knowz...maybe i jus a dumbass! LOL good drop and keep it up!!
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thnx fa the feedback, and holla at me. UPPIN YA'LL^^^^^^^
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