ruff_tuff_thug vs john dope
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 07:35 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

john dope has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 07:05 PM.

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 07:06 PM.

fuck this fake ass mutha fuckin pussy you cant win john dope...
you get in truble for cussin and yo mom washes yo mout wit soap...
your gay and live in trashcans you say you on my respect list...
now you mutha fuckin gay ass says that your not a fukin alias...
you wont challenge the most gayest bitch on this site Empire...
you cant sing for shit prolly and wouldnt do good but fail in the quire...
you cant win this battle cuz you aint shit too scared to tell who you are...
for your worth less fuckin life i'm gonna give it a mutha fuckin scar...
kill you in the hardest strongest car in a driveby wigga give it up...
you will surely see that every one on this site thinks you fuckin suck...
i'm gonna beat you in this battle and all i'm gonna do is fuckin close you...
but before i kill you beat you close you i will surely expose you...

hurry...

you may hate on ruff_tuff but hey at least hes original...
having your skills elevate in three months is so typical
this cat's lines are like the garbage rhyme receptical...
says hes a godfather...even his avvy looks skeptical
tried to start a crew but that dream wasnt reasonable...^
no tryouts...nobody on the site'll even be seen with you
youll never be better...ya skills are movin backwards and in reverse...
even these newbies think youre the wackest thing theyve ever heard^^
after this merking youll need a drink but youre too young to get drunk...
hope you dont get hungover from ya first time lettin "J-D" fuck you up^^^

^tried to start a crew but nobody signed up for it...i believe the link is in his sig

^^http://community.rapverse.com/showt...536#post1570536

^^^j-d...john dope...jack daniels...fuck you up...you get it...

This was feedback posted for ruff_tuff_thug
 

checkin this outv looking at the poll

Voted For: john dope


A pretty weak abttle

Ruff...your flow was really good, structure was great but those were the high points of your verse, you had no recognizable punches and no personals, no multies, basic vocab, u really gotta elevate

John....your flow was equally as good, structure as well your opener was blah but the following bar was tight the rest was fillerish but dat one line got you the win in this one, shoulda been much stronger

Vote: john

uppin.....

Voted For: john dope

Both came with good structure and personals also. But John came with better personals and harder punches too. No hate ruff, but your drop just wasn't very enjoyable. And for further reference, it's spelled "choir", not "quire"...You need to improve on your punches, since in this battle you tried to focus on personals too much. But no hate, keep doin' ya thing.
Vote - john dope

Return the favor with an honest and explained vote (I think only ruff can since you need 5 wins but john maybe your alias could hit it up). Link's in the sig...

This was feedback posted for john dope
 

checking polls...

Voted For: john dope

jd gets this,1 sided battle the whole way,jd had punches that connected....did'nt hit overly hard but were good enough to take this battle..structure wasnt very semetrical but flow did'nt fall off...ok personal with the avy hit....ruff tuff you had no creativity in your verse you were jus makin statements n you had no punches in your verse ,my advice would be to try n not use fuck in your verse so much...it lacks in content,its to easy to do....keep elevatin...

gracias...il rtf later this afternoon

...uppin...

Voted For: john dope

aiiight, dope got this

more complex verse, better punches n personals, both lacked humour...but JD's finisher was off the hook (an i'ma BIG jac daniels fan) so personally i loved that line n that was my reazon for John to take this battle...

ruff tuff, ya flow was.....blah, some parts i looked n ya really made me take note, oithers was just plain garbage )no offence man an no hate, just bein real) ....but yea, ya opener was horrible, it was sumthin of a 3rd garde diss lol, keep elevatin dogg, i know u got more talent then u had to offer in this battle...

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cool shit...uppin for k.o.