Never Let Em' See You Sweat!!!!a Must Peep!!!!!!
 

Ghetto star!!! I'm Savo Escobar
Nigga spit ya credentials, drivin impressious cars
Stashbox for da pistol, FLAWLESS ain't just my squad
We fill cigars, and don't fuck wit STRESS at all
From the neck ta arm, necklace charm, Rolex the arm
15 secs. ta bomb, don't check me best check ya broad
I ain't upset at all, I hit the project...and BALL
I'm tryin ta set it off, fuck em' wit 5 hits of raw
...Yes YALL!!! when a dogg thats less barks in Juvenile Hall
I was snuffin niggaz out in Mess Hall
My lifes been real fucked up, I must confess yall
But the devil ain't goin get the best, he'll never see me sweat at all
(chorus)
On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess
So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest
Only a bitch nigga ride for the West
So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat

Well I stay strictly spittin these facts, just relax
My nigga chill, take a seat... and just sit on back
Nigga this is my world, so I plan to have it my way
I run this shit, niggaz that talk shit gotta pay
I'll be gone for the day,where them gangstaz slang them thangs
We grab 4 4's and go on the attack, after dismay
Wit a vision on my mind makin feddy increase
I'm unique, you can tell by the way that I speak
I break bitches, while I make bitches bow to my feet
I shake bitches while I'm takin they bread on 20 inches
Its crunch time...niggaz won't hesitate ta bust ni9es
We on the FrontLines, but tryin ta hide from 1 time
I'm out ta get mine,.......BITCH FOREAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm in the field, this nigga here's on a mission ta keel (kill)
I'm wise and still young, makin large amounts of sums
Its real shit, I was raised where the killers come from
(chorus)
On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess
So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest
Only a bitch nigga ride for the West
So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat

Your flow was good( See I hate reading shit that u cant decipher the flow from, while u readin it.) It painted good pictures as well, I was able to visualize what u talked about with no problem. It definitely wasnt boring reading either, it kept my attention all the way through. Yah it was definitely good reading, and look like u could put this to the right trak and have somethin. So I give u 10/10 on this one, for sho.

Ghetto star!!! I'm Savo Escobar
Nigga spit ya credentials, drivin impressious cars
Stashbox for da pistol, FLAWLESS ain't just my squad
We fill cigars, and don't fuck wit STRESS at all
From the neck ta arm, necklace charm, Rolex the arm
15 secs. ta bomb, don't check me best check ya broad
I ain't upset at all, I hit the project...and BALL
I'm tryin ta set it off, fuck em' wit 5 hits of raw
...Yes YALL!!! when a dogg thats less barks in Juvenile Hall
I was snuffin niggaz out in Mess Hall
My lifes been real fucked up, I must confess yall
But the devil ain't goin get the best, he'll never see me sweat at all
(chorus)
On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess
So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest
Only a bitch nigga ride for the West
So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat
^^^^^^^^^^^^ I LIKE DIS PART OF DA VERSE CAUSE IT GAVE ME TO PAINT DA PICTURE IN MY MIND AND TELLING ME WHATS GOING ON.


Well I stay strictly spittin these facts, just relax
My nigga chill, take a seat... and just sit on back
Nigga this is my world, so I plan to have it my way
I run this shit, niggaz that talk shit gotta pay
I'll be gone for the day,where them gangstaz slang them thangs
We grab 4 4's and go on the attack, after dismay
Wit a vision on my mind makin feddy increase
I'm unique, you can tell by the way that I speak
I break bitches, while I make bitches bow to my feet
I shake bitches while I'm takin they bread on 20 inches
Its crunch time...niggaz won't hesitate ta bust ni9es
We on the FrontLines, but tryin ta hide from 1 time
I'm out ta get mine,.......BITCH FOREAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm in the field, this nigga here's on a mission ta keel (kill)
I'm wise and still young, makin large amounts of sums
Its real shit, I was raised where the killers come from
(chorus)
On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess
So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest
Only a bitch nigga ride for the West
So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat
^^^^^^^^^^^ YO IT FELT LIKE U WAS TRYIN TO TAKE AN GANG TURF/ BUT DIS WAS COOL MAYE KEEP AT IT MAYNE

DIS SHIT GOT=FLOW,PAINTS A PICTURE,NICE MAYNE

COMING SOON FROM DA POET= ALONE CHECK DAT OUT COMING SOON

that shit was tight to me
im still new to this portion of the game-online freestylin on paper
but i liked it