Streetryda vs Eyvon
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 06:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed for posting battle links in the Lyricist Lounge

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:34 PM.

yo, if u think that im wack, then im tha wackiest rapper u'll ever meet/
i AM feminem, u tha weakest motherfucker ever to hit tha urban streets/
im not tha greatest rapper, i aint gonna lie bout shit like that/
but i got sum goodies and an ass thats phat/
u just wanna take advantage of me cause im a woman/
well bitch u mistakin, i guess u got another thing commin/
ur weak ass punches and pussy rhymes, u dont git tha detail/
o, u a man? i coulda swore i was battlin a female/
cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/
cause when i git heated, watch yo back cause i drop bombs/
my lyrics'll keep droppin yo ass off, i fight like i was in Vietnam/
so look at me, next time i c u, i wanna watch u run like u remember me/
u forget? ill jog ur brain around tha block 2 exersize ur memory/
so dont git me started, ill rattle ur skull like my spit is an earthquake/
tryin 2 battle eyvon and win is tha worst decision u could eva make!

streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:47 PM.

U-U-UPPIN yall!

cmon, u know i merked him!!!!

dont think ima go soft just cuz you a female/
ill still rip you off the rack like you was some retail/
dont fuck around or i leave you to meet a new friend....the ground/
fuck with me buck with me i aint afraid to put you down/
eyvon your gona leave on the ambulance/
cuz as soon as you took that second glance i enhanced/
next time watch your stance cuz when i get it im taking my chance/

u had a bad ending... no hate though
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Eyvon

daaaaaaaamn

eyvon got this hands down!

no contest, the fimenem n urab streets line was siiiick too..

ya finisher was....i dunno eyvon, it was aight, couldda used it better i think, but on the whole decent wordplay n punches, structyre maybe needs improvin as does ya humour in ya punches, but nice drop e yvon, keep em comin sweetness

street, u either understimated eyvon or just didnt hit hard enuff....in any case, one key word...ELEVATION

return the favor

p e a c e

ya ya ya! thats wut im talkin bout yall! freestyle battle 2. no writtens. writtens r 4 pussies...

Voted For: Eyvon

yeah gurl nice rymes,nice flow,exellent punches good vocab and i was feelin yer flow strret ryda you did ok too but not enough punches and sum of yer shitt didnt even make sense to me sorry this battle goes hands down to eyvon madd love u gott skillz gurl peace

young_buckshot]Voted For: Eyvon

yeah gurl nice rymes,nice flow,exellent punches good vocab and i was feelin yer flow strret ryda you did ok too but not enough punches and sum of yer shitt didnt even make sense to me sorry this battle goes hands down to eyvon madd love u gott skillz gurl peace chek out dis battle







http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149648

ya ya ya! ima KO this motherfucker! cmon yall!~

yeh i wasnt too good in this battle i guess its cuz i was kinda off topic here and there but no hate i am just learnin i cant win every battle but i still try and i guess it woulda helped if i made my verse longer but eh ohh well
good battle Eyvon

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

battle of the sexes (ryda does not represent all)

punches- Eyvon
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- Eyvon
word play- Eyvon
flow- Eyvon
bitin (New!)- Eyvon

Eyvon u need to lay off watchin 8 Mile. "cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/" off 8 mile when he freestyles in the parking lot. u re worded it but still from it. other than that great verse, keep elevatin

Ryda way too elemntary, and u need to use wut u got, u went minimum. u need to elevate.

Eyvon:
"cause when i git heated, watch yo back cause i drop bombs/
my lyrics'll keep droppin yo ass off, i fight like i was in Vietnam/" nice punch

Ryda:
"eyvon your gona leave on the ambulance/
cuz as soon as you took that second glance i enhanced/
next time watch your stance cuz when i get it im taking my chance/" decent punch.

v/eyvon if i could vote

uppin.
u know i won!!!