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Raphael vs the_crazy_one
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 06:47 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Raphael has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 09:16 PM.
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I'll disconnect Ur neck,wit ma fucking 'crazy' 'punches'...
'Rip' U to 'pieces' and leave U looking like packable lunches... You couldn't 'spot' me....if I had the fucking chicken pox! Shit, you couldn't be 'on top of my game' unless U was humpin my Xbox... I'll b leaving U 'trembling'...and unable to 'ride'... Fuck wit me and I'll put your record...more on the loss side... I might be 0-0,but its better than negative 1... Shit,after U gain this loss and rematch,you wont just get one!(loss)... Aight,understand the shit,and blah blah blah. |
the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:29 AM.
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being soft affects performance, in and out of battle, dude><
S'why Angela Devi knows she wants it...just not from you>< Cuz ya always come up short, never once stood tall>< Only Raphael I ever heard of, his rhymes didnt hit at all>< Ya freak family's like ya posts, I bet ya never noticed this>< Mom and Dad are the cartoons who produced a fuckin bitch>< He checked in killing characters, like it's just wasting time>< But what'll really kill HIS character, is his shitty fuckin rhyme>< So I hate a bleeding heart, like I hate going to churches>< They think there's good in everyone till I show em Raphael's verses.>< Nah, just playing, I know you's cool, and in the end>< ill beat you just like im beatin M.C DUCK for his win>< |
Voted For: the_crazy_one
flow-the_crazy_one, a lot easier to read, and much more put together not stretching one line and making the other a lot shorter so his flow was better punches-the_crazy_one, had way more punches then raphael, didnt notice any that big in raphaels verse personals-none, both didnt use any personals on each other multies-none, none of them used the correct multies and plugged them in to spice up their lines so nobody gets it vocab-the_crazy_one, better vocab then raphael, raphael seemed like we was just starting, he didnt have much vocab that could have been replaced in some lines, crazyone had better originality/creativity-the_crazy_one, both had somewhat creativity in some lines but crazy one had much more, raphael only 2 or 3 lines filled with something different,crazy one had lot more of creative things in his verse overall i vote the_crazy_one, besides the elements i marked none, he won the rest of them over raphael |
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uppin dis shit...
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Voted For: the_crazy_one
you klled it all with punches creatitive ness and wordplay good job dude Vote/CrazyOne |
Voted For: the_crazy_one
nice battle u 2 but again as i said the crazy 1 wins this 1 better pucnhes n stuff nice verse man ur kindda good the crazy 1 wins this hands down no dout about it v/ the crazy 1 |
Voted For: Raphael
v/Raphael. Crazy_One, your punches weren't that bad, but I don't think they really connected, I also likes Raphaels Xbox joke, so, he gets my vote. |
Yo can u ppl vote on my battles, links in the sig.
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up in four votes
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up in for vote s...
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uppin for votes on this battle and the rest of my battle i got linkz in my siggg
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