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Young Mix 09-15-04 07:07 PM

Young Mix vs Proverse
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 07:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-15-04 07:10 PM

Young Mix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:10 PM.

System 09-15-04 07:30 PM

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:30 PM.

Young Mix 09-15-04 07:30 PM

gggg

Young Mix 09-15-04 07:36 PM

Don't spit real when ya fake,cause I got flows dat straight leave ya shit baked.Label call ya up like"we need to let ya shit wait"cause Young Mix make more than ya fuckin mixtape.
He pussy,infact he on dat rocafella shit
thinkin ya hard,but ya softer than a mozarella stick.

Kawn Flixx 09-16-04 07:17 PM

"old" lyrics but "young" experience you still "pending"(loading)
coudldn't find your own name so you bit one of a real MC(his name's taken)
"false advertisment" while you claim that you are "mixing"
while another artist is lending his name granted entry (mix it up=twix)
why battle when i'm a general and you're a hectic ceddet(young)
you only challenged me cuz you know your record could be reset
there's a boarder line between stupid and brave
you have yet to cross brave so no praise for you is attained
we're at the end of this stage,for you the rap game will fade
soon you will get over the "premature combination" phase (young mix)

distilled 09-16-04 07:23 PM

Voted For: ProVerse

Wow, this battle was pretty weak, I was expecting more from you proverse, but most of that didnt even rhyme, the wordplay was good, and the flow was good, and so was the structure, and thats what wins you hte battle.

Young Mix, that was awful, you need to elevate like whooa

Kawn Flixx 09-16-04 07:41 PM

^ ya true

I battled alot of people at school today

i thought i would do alot betta then this....

and i agree the 1st line didn't rhyme i jus realized

but the rest was pretty good to me

thanx for votin

~1~

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 07:44 PM

Voted For: ProVerse

aiiiight

easy to see who the more complex emcee of the 2 are

pro, ya dropped a nice verse, decent wordplay, some nice personals n aight metas...
both lacked a killer punch or 2 in the verse
but the more complex structured harder hittin proverse got this...

mix, ya flow was aight, ya structure was terrible tho, work on that (no hate) an i didnt see a noticable punch or a hard hititn personal, u had some aight wordplay but improve the structre n punches..

return the favor ya'll...

p e a c e

iamthatdude87 09-16-04 07:47 PM

Voted For: ProVerse

proverse won.....no contest....he wins easily....yo mix next time try to keep up wit him and u need to up in every catagorie.....yo hit my battles up they in my sig....

Logic The Goonie 09-16-04 08:11 PM

Voted For: ProVerse

young- bad structure, bad punches, bad wordplay. just try harder, read the tutorials and elevate....2/10

proverse-ehh punches was iight, wordplay was coo, but try to make your structure more legible....tis kinda hard to read it, you can still elevate some more......6/10

return the favor.....links in the sig

Kawn Flixx 09-16-04 08:20 PM

thanx for votin

i'ma return the favor ri now :)

~1~

Abraxas 09-16-04 08:22 PM

Voted For: ProVerse

im laughing.... young mix sucked so badly he needs real elevating cos his lines were not good
Proverse: ya lines were very good but i find no reason why you tryed that hard of a verse and young mix comes with a weak verse also ya punches were better ya flowed well and you wno this battle in alll acpects easyily

Young: that shit was garbage and it wasnt that good it had no punches or perosonals and you didnt even meet the line reqiurment

vote proverse vor a better verses and strong punches and he one onesided


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