ProVerse vs Malefic
Battle Rules:
10 lines minimum AND Maximum No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-18-04 at 07:42 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:44 PM.
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ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 07:28 PM.
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You may be 'From', But you flow witta wack state of mind-
Facing me? Only way you get up is if we record an rewind I had to status decline, jus to endure this "oooo enducer" Proverse deals wit more cock...than 4 red headed rooster's- They say you can't judge by a record, But this time its true.... Cus I'll be honest....your worste than that empire dude- Disconnected....from reality,'verse'can't catch a dial-tone.. Dazed,Confused-n-bruis'd like ur avatar...pickin ur dome! If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first- Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse |
*'s mean an explination is due
[FONT=Palatino Linotype].::the only good lines I "spot" is the "spot" in your empty spaces ::.
.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::. .::your lines have no bounderies like the hatians demonstratins::. .::you're a MALEFICtion character with "fake" lines as a inspiration::. .::how you have a black name but freinds with a racist?...you're spacious::. .::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::. .::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::. :huh: .::swallow the loss and spit, and it doesn't change Hue::. .::maybe it's becaused you and losses have had previous disputes::.(battles) .::all your rhymes predictable like the pictures appearing on a movie reel::.[/FONT (your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::. draw=cards--bridge=a card game) (.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::. malefic was a haitian man on MASH which was on a base) (.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::. :huh: his sig is scrambled and confusing-you'll see after the battle :thumbup: ) that's all me vote on this me or FIC'll return the favor |
Voted For: Malefic
very great verse both of you and both had nice drops overall Proverse: ya lnies were good nice line good drop overall but ya lines were a lil too stretched and out you got the multis thoguh but it really didnt help ya punches were iight it was ok and ya personals were good but you really didnt have to put explaining that much cos it ruined a rappers real skill and shit umm you had ok strucutre thoguh ya lnie flowed well... nice drop Malefic: ya verse was good nice drop nice verse overall ya had the punches it was really good and some were funny and really original ya had some ok personals but ya structre was good overall and your lines and verse flowed well... both were good Vote Malefic becuasse he had stronger punches proverse could have won if he had more stronger punches and if he had less explaining |
Voted For: ProVerse
yo pro i think u took it here dawg malefic dont even makes sense yo give me your opinion on my battle its still open Nutz_B vs Wish Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
god damn it wasn't explained :(
somebody ELSE vote but thanx anyway |
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Lol That Shudnt Count You Have To Put More Explaining That That And If You Dont Understand It Then Dont Vote Read The Rules |
^it isn't gonna. ;) Uppin. -1
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Voted For: ProVerse
yer unbalivable i jsut couldent see threw thos punches man i guess ima hafe to vote for you man heres what i came out with haha:laugh:: punches: proverse vocab: Pro wordplay: for sure Pro metas: pro multi's: Pro stucture: Pro flow: no need for this in text openers: Pro closeners: Pro vote: ProVerse return the favour honestly in my battle verse nutz b the links in ma sig thanks peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^thanx for voting
uppin for more i'll return the favor HONESTLY now |
Uppin
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Voted For: Malefic
ok battle punches- male personals- verse multis- male metas- verse word play- verse flow- male Male u had more punches and better flow. try more personals. Verse u had ok word play, and ok personals. Try more punches though. Multis help 2 Male: "If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first- Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse" ok closer. verse: ".::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::. .::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::." ok personal. v/male |
Every line a had a personal fool....Uppin ne ways.....-1
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