Diabolic_aka_134 vs Boy_wonder
 

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Boy_wonder has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:01 PM.

Diabolic_aka_134 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 11:12 PM.

aka yer name shoulda been like a weapon ,an ak..
cuz your shit is so off you would need it to spray....
while im smokin fat blunts and hittin it up wit my bently...
ill be eating u up like its breakfast and yer complimentry....
i gotta desert eagle heater,but i dont need to shoot...
fukk u up so quik,then be yer best bud and give u gunit recruit
naww i couldent do that,were only one color and u anit blakk. not to mention u ride in an xl,while im rollin on dubs about to prevail...i fukked up my structure,osamas yer luver,
u a dick rider,osamas u must be in al quida..
stepp it up if ya ever wanna make sum cash.....
look at it this way u gott afganastan hash....
so stop talkin trash,yer ass is grass...
smoke you like when i open up my stash......

Uh Oh! looks like another muh fukn front
this cat boy wonder tryna b like g-unit n stunt
well all i can say hees a pussy cunt
but i dang cant eat that out
but imma jus speak the truth
uve probably hit more homos(homers[home runs]) then babe ruth
this cats shook, he aint no assassin
pictures his momma in his head, thats his only contraction
thing is u listen to ya momma, n she listens to me, thats y she told u get tha fuck outta my family
the only money u got is on rap verse
too bad u cant make a withdraw, that must b a curse
ur a dude n act so femineme(duno how to spell it:/)
ur momma know me as the m&m man kuz i nut in her mouth not in her hand
-Holla-

no beef man not hatin

-Holla-

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

weak close battle.

punches- 134
personals- wonder
multis- wonder
metas- 134
word play- 134
flow- 134

134 decent start but then u started talkin bout bein poor, bein gay, and his mom. battles between u and him, leave the mommas out of it. decent flow, try more personals, keep elevatin

Wonder good start but u fell of mid way. work on keepin everythin consistant.

134:
" thing is u listen to ya momma, n she listens to me, thats y she told u get tha fuck outta my family" decent punch.

Wonder:
" while im smokin fat blunts and hittin it up wit my bently...
ill be eating u up like its breakfast and yer complimentry...." ok punch.

v/134

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

Vote diabloic

both had bad wordplay and bad punhces

BUT WONDER TALKIN BOUT BENTLEYS AND SHIT
THATS FUCKIN WACK ASS FUCK

VOTE DIABOLIC CAUSE HE DIDNT GLORIFY HIMSELF LIKE HE WAS JESUS

WONDER NO BENTLEY
DONT LIE IN BATTLES LIKE THAT
THAT WILL LOSE VOTES FOR YOU

the only money u got is on rap verse
too bad u cant make a withdraw, that must b a curse
only thing i thought was good

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

I Give This One To Diabolic, Just.

Diabolic: Ya Structure was a lil off and so was ya flow in parts. Decent punches, i suppose. They Difinatly hit harder than wonder. Vocab was, mmmmm, ok. Try to add sum metas and wordplay and maybe work on ya structure.

Boy_Wonder: Ya Structure wasn't great and neither was ya flow. Punches were kinda weak too. Quit talkin about guns and weed and shit. Like Diabolic ya need to work on ya structure.

Vote: Diabolic

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