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Street poet vs Tolerant Level
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10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-16-04 at 08:47 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 08:17 AM.
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Tolerant Level has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 08:25 AM.
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Your Verse must B On BirthControl cuz Even Tha slightest Menstral Seed of a Punch ain't CUMmin through 2 grace-my-cheeks/
I'll intubate n enforce-tha-threat while i control-ya-breath n make ya lungs Explode while I multiply a Forcefull-set/ Make u answer tha horn-of-Debt While Punchin Your Face so hard it'll make ya Head Ringin so u cud really Call-upon-tha-death// I'll deduct-ur-miss, then destruct-ya-ribs, till u can tuck ur own head under ur own legs and self suck-ya-dick// Take it a step further turn this bout into world-war-three, even if u attached switchblades 2 ur lines still couldn't murder-me// You -------up, talkin all your Shit and now ya luck's-up // Ya call me a puss when ya nutless and can't even "bust"-stuff// You rhyme lame and I "entertain brains" with lyrical "fun"da"mentals"// With my fists wrapped in gauze I throw hooks and punch-ya-temple// I've decided to crush ya verse-wit unrehearsed-Shit that Niggaz worship// (My Skillz) Watch as my words-rip through ya body until ya ------ nerves-split..// Leavin ya frame full of contusions after this lyrical intrusion.. // My lyrics should be against the law because I'm alphabet "abusin"// YEP YEP UPPIN |
aiight ill see wat i can do fo yah
poet has verses speak shit sloppier then diahera i dont speak shit u flush it and poet is flowing liek a river ill kill yah scripts and fill yah dips but the rapist killed yah fetus tilted yah features is dead now u gonna be a lone penis with stone creases cause yah battle life u been hidin secrets like yah crew they full of aborted faggots only a few i respect but i sonned them with sorted maggets the this battle is yours to win u still to sinn ill fill yah finns and staple yah dreams and enable yah seams cause yah clique evolves my revolution or get Disabled or delete something quik sorry im on writers block fo real getting some rustyness outta me sorry for the weak verse bruh |
im sure only 10 lines not 18 lines wat u think u doin
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Voted For: Street poet
aight im not gonna break this down,tolerant level you came ok but alot of your shit was weak,n you did'nt match what street had in content ,wordplay,meta's n flow...no hard punches in this battle no personals...you both need to elevate on that....n keep in mind attackin a crew iun a verse when its not a crew battle isnt really a good diss,its like a mom joke...now street poet you gotta work on your structure,im not sure if its cause your capitalizin every 1st letter or wat but shorten those lines or cover them up with consistant multi's,try n make your verse presentable n not tossed all over the page.....no hate jus keep elevatin some nice stuff in both verses.... |
Aight Danks Daz Yo More Votes Uppin
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Voted For: Street poet
iight this was plain n simple. street def came harder in dis battle. he had sum tight rhymes wit a good flow. his vocab was nice. n the punchlines were jus wow You rhyme lame and I "entertain brains" with lyrical "fun"da"mentals"// With my fists wrapped in gauze I throw hooks and punch-ya-temple// wow..... vote=street poet |
Voted For: Street poet
daaam nice verse street poet got this one, street poet had creativity,really good punches,multies,and vocab on lock here, only thing didnt like was the stretched lines, but other then that street poet killed it in every aspect |
thanx for tha votes close battle street poet won..
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correct mayne yo uppin dis shit
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Voted For: Street poet
aiiiiight, poet got this.. wasnt really feelin ya opener poet, seemed a lil strecthed n not as creative as your usual self, but as the verse went on you seemed to get stronger an the finisher killed it, nice mixture of punches n vocab... decent drop, 6.5/10.. tolerant, ya flow seemed rusty like you said.. ya need'a improve on punches if your goin up against somebody like poet, but ya flow was pretty decent for somebody with writers block, just lacked the few killer punches that poet dropped... keep em comin ya'll n return the favor p e a c e |
Aight peep'z one more vote lets gooooooooooooooooooooo
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Voted For: Street poet
Ight this vote was easy to make. Street had the vocab and metas to finish dis cat off. You both had good punches. tolerant level.. ur shit was too basic and i didnt feel any personals at all. u need to alaberate a little more and get some personals in dat homey. street you just need some better structure, some of ur sentences are kinda long and hard to read. but overall u got dis one kid. 1 |
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