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the_crazy_one vs Street poet
topic- FOR A MINUTE.................
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the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:57 AM.
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Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:58 AM.
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Mother… …me and you should take a walk for a minute… Define gratitude, and complete tasks at hand unfinished… Together, just you and me, aimed at life, both in unity… Yet you hid the negative, problematic immunity… Sent me in the jungle, without a knowledge of defeat… Until I found it at my doorstep, slowly touching at my feet… And I fell to its seduction, veins now flowed with relief… Without knowing the streets, you said ‘come home wit me, please’… Back on my feet, no booze or cheap money, and hardly smoking… But… It’s like they’re all the audience…the applaud sign always broken… Cuz see I didn’t get recognition, no one seen any of my achievements… I was still a druggie alcoholic… only an Ex added to the prefix… But my mother did, so in a sense, our relationship did last... But I didn't get a minute like this...for thanks...b4 she passed... Brother… …let’s chill and kick it for a minute…. Talk about girls, cars and life, the issues that are in it… We used to talk a lot, comes to speech, you’re like a manic… Yet now it’s Hello - Goodbye…our relationship’s mechanic… My tendencies get intense at times, I'm sorry I got insane... But bruises are skin deep...discipline's sticks in your brain... I knew my path's outcome, I tried, yet you bleed more... Stood with you at the crossroads, provide alternate detours... But we lost something when, you started rebelling against... ...everyone and everything, broke on the street,ya money spent... Remember when mom and dad split? You were so confused?... Youth mind state, never blinded the truth, never refused... But along this path, somewhere we lost touch, in time... ...you moved up, I stopped, blocked by the all the dollar signs... I just wish you knew, an older brother was taught a lesson... And I wish we had a minute like this...just one, just to reflect it...Father…. …allow me to be yourself for a minute…. Roles aside, allow me to feel what you felt in ya spirit… Responsibility flips, sweat drips, understanding new lessons… You live life for something higher…I’m clocked in at 40 seconds… Defenseless, I rebelled, gained no control, they used to tell… …never bite the hand that feeds…even if they control your life as well? ... 30 left…open chest, expose the heart you don’t apply… Life denied, hopes die…somewhat in conjunction with your pride… My father and me...a mere hairline crack in this family portrait.... Yet the shard is close to broken…matter of time before I forfeit… Cept the keyhole's now slim....we just seemingly diminished... Parallel lives spin whole digits....hopes falls, defy physics... 10 seconds left … I want to tell you all, explain my strife… If you only took a minute like this … before I took my life |
if you wait a MINUTE
to take a look at the worl that we live in youll see confusing questions with no to meny answers but the worlds peace is being deceased but all that is is anoher reson for stress and tension But wy do we wit till our MINUTE is gone so we can bjust be attacked a-pawn and why did we wait a MINUTE to go after Bin Laudain we might of moved fast but that one MINUTE was to long Why do some people get shot if thay acdentally go to the wrong block it aint there fault that socitey's wrong in this world every MINUTE someone get's shoot at and every five MINUTE's some dies from a bullet and if you take a MINUTE to just look at the worlds news all youll see is innocent peoples lives being abused all because we cant live without discramation so that some of our friendships end up in TRAGIC RELATIONS I know it sucks but it was a hard topic for me i dont just wright to topics i wright to thoughts |
Aight Nice Topical Battle Here Uppin For Votes Mayne
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Yo Uppin On Da Topical Battle Homies
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uppin this yall we need votes not just views
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Voted For: Street poet
Vote: Street Poet Lyrics: street Metas: street Complexity: street Multies: street Topic coverage: street structure: street Overall: street This was both by both Mc's but at the end of the day no beef to tha crazy one but street poets verse was on another level.Elevate G and keep it up |
hey dont get down on me its my first topical battle
Yo Uppin On Da Topical Battle peoples |
uppin again come on yall vote thats it VOTE
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uppin this topical for votes
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Leave Links And I'll Get Back To Dem But U Gots To Vote Peepz
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uppin this i will return favors
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uppin for votes plz uppin leave links i'll get back to it mayne
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