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~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-16-04 10:29 AM

Outlaw Poet Ft-tupac (sik)
 
"Outlaw" ["My Ambitions of a Ridah" Beat by Tupac

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy

I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw!

I'm an Outlaw, I'm fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw!

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

[Verse 1]
My nigga I'm tired of the way they treatin me//
I'm about to go full blast on the niggas make em sleep//
I try to positive but they won't let it work//
trippin over my lyrics which is just absurd//
now what I can do is straight up kill you//
come up in your crib let my niggas drill you//
you may have thought I was optimist, but that's in the past//
you on the ground gettin roughed by someone who's changed fast//
maybe a few years ago you would want to get my ass kicked//
a few years laters I leave these bitches in their caskets//
yea that's right, it's not Michael Withers anymore//
it's a changed mutha fucka walkin through that door//
cock it back bang bang, yea he's well hurt//
layin in the dirt, blood splattered on his shirt//
a feared mutha fuck, yo I'm nothin less//
better wear your vest, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw//
I don't take shit, even if you was my kin//
niggas know it, I'll bust some Jason shit on your men//
too many cowards on the street come and try to test me//
they learn the hard way I'll put it simply//
it's a sad thing, when your all alone, just you//
by yourself, it's the pride that flows in you//
tryna start beef yea it's a cold thing//
I show them off with the Pop Pop Bang Bang//
you really think I give a damn if you hurt//
there's too many demons in my brain that lurk//
Common sense man, I told how I've change //
guess what, . . . I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

[Verse 2]
You commin back for more who the hell do you think you is?//
I'm like Mike Lowrey except I don't live in bliss//
cold-hearted, thats what everyone sees me ass//
well then guess what nigga I don't give a fuck about your ass//
and you cops y'all need to stop that brutality//
y'all acted like pussies when you heard from Ice-T//
a heart dark, as the color of black//
it seems everyday I need to watch my back//
An Outlaw, so I don't give a hell//
I ain't scared to die I already know I'm goin to hell//
Lord I ask for forgivness and please show me the light//
I've done too much sinnin in my mutha fuckin life//
My sides, are hard all over//
no time for a side of a nigga bein sober//
leavin mothers mournin their son with sad tears//
get ready to fear, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

[Verse 3]
the niggas know it, I don't give a fuck//
but when the beef comes I make all these niggas duck//
beefin with some pussies I don't even know//
due to this bitch that acts like a sophisticated ho//
I need to forgive but yo I just can't forget//
I wish that day never happened where we met//
I'm gettin through the hatin, but theses pussies don't//
when they see in da real all they do is damn choke//
my own friends have been shocked by my sudden changes//
it's da anger inside that makes me leave them hangin//
I'm a menace, that's why you can't finish//
what you did in the past cuz I'll come and kill this//
it's a shame the way I got caught up in the mix//
rest in peace Pac, you still thuggin in the bricks//
Renegades and Soldiers told yall how I was//
it was a hit, but some still didn't get the message cous//
my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts//
when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought//
it's my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts//
when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought//
the moral of the story is to leave me alone//
go on with your bussiness, cuz I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

Dirty Nigga 09-16-04 11:14 AM

Aiiiight, not bad homeboy, not bad at all...

the third verse came strongest, nice lyrical content, nice mix of punches, real lyrics an some gangsta shit too, chorus is nice,, overall a decent drop that u should be proud of, i personally loved it, 8/10, keep em comin poet

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-16-04 12:44 PM

Aight Danx Yo Uppp Dis Shit Lookin For Some More Feedback

Ice Pick 09-16-04 01:10 PM

yeah this was good

Like shotta said, best parts came from ya third shit,

Not bad for a remix peice, usually these suck


But yeah i give it a 8.2 outta 10

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-16-04 01:34 PM

O Aight Danx Ice Pick Yo More Feed Uppin


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