E-Dubz vs intensify effect
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines tops
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding
no lame votes explain them.....

good luck.. :thumbup:

this should be a class sic battle..... :evilgrin:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 10:02 PM

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:35 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 09:37 PM.

here somethin quik, should b enuff

i got they tongues twisted...... lookin like Thiefs at Night
this nigga spit like a bitch...... i think his briefs is to tight
i hate hearin bout the ‘bread’ from these ‘whites’ who hold heat
who instead know they live right and hey shit is ‘whole wheat’
i’ll wrap flows around you...... till you got a spineless back
you couldnt win if you was Frankee and you stole my track
he in over his head, like ‘lucy and ricky’ this aint ‘classical pairs’
face it you fell off yo game, like parapelegics in musical chairs

dont get the wordplay, dont vote

i know why u a CLASS-SIC... peep and grasp it, how u bitch like a mom
plus u got everyone lost trying to read u'r lines like dyslexic hand readers studying palms

i know playing knock-out kings the only punches u use to throwin
and if i forced ya face down under the stream E-dubs still couldnt be flowing

This Chump Bites, Stumped On Site, I Got you 'Sweating Between My Posts' Like 'Exhausted Up-rights...
You Suck In Fights, Up Your Height, E-dubs 'Shit Never Lands' Like 'Feces On Continued Flights *ha*

E-dubs wouldnt elevate if he was whodini,(magician)
N hes known to be grabbin more mushroom shaped things(dicks)then mario and luigi, * fuck it made it quick*

good drop...lets get votes

^^^ yea tight battle N nice drop....

props N much respect....

upp'in for votes....

uppin..

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

i was going 2 vote for e dubz but 100posts blah o well

can yall drop an honest vote

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uppin..

Voted For: e-dubz

aight battle e-dubz gets this though punches were more complex n his verse was set out with WAY better structure n flow,both had no personals even though ie tried with using his name it jus wasnt cuttin it srry dawg,ie some of your lines were stretched with ok multi's ta cover it up but it was awful hard ta follow your flow at times ...e dubz gets my vote for harder hitting more complex punches..
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Voted For: e-dubz

I.E.- ehh very very simple. nothing special bout ya verse except for the feces on continued flights line(good job choosin a closer) but the rest was pretty simple to me. punches was ehh, wordplay was ehh, flow was ehh, basically just all ehh.....5/10

E-dubz- i hate you for not writing a verse like this against me! lol j.k. what im sayin is you have done much better. punches were iight, wordplay was nice, metas structure and flow was all on point so overall good job.....7/10

RTF....links in da sig :thumbup:

^haha fo sho.. uppin

Voted For: e-dubz

lmao...e-dubz nice short verse... the punches all hit hard... good overall verse... nice wordplay and punches... intensify ur verse was aight.. i expected a little bit more from u... but u still held your own... but dubz got this one with wordplay and punches..