Imagine vs -Noble-
 

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Check in by: 09-20-04 at 07:45 AM

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Imagine has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 07:46 AM.

-Noble- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 07:50 AM.

Yo noble think he got lyrics dat are gonna make me dazzle
to scared to battle cuz he'll know i'll beat him wid no hassle
he writes lyrics to turn him mom on she undresses in a thong
he just gets turned on by it and starts to think of sex song
you are just a complete comedy act noble ur names just wack
oh no nobles gonna attack!!! better sit back and just laugh

mixin 'past with the present'...so dont start a fight..
i imagine.. that ur future.. don't look so bright!!!
u blowin hot air... just talken shit.. u need to let off steam..
cuz ur sick imagination... is just a 'day dream'!!!
like try and fail... kid get in fights with his own peers..
Cuz last time L has seen A W... was drinkin the root beer!!*

* A & W is a root beer place...

i meant to say I.. not L..


^correct that..


nice verse imagine.....

g'luck

This was feedback posted for -Noble-
 

ummmmmm i can't decide and if i did.......sinner would think its hate;)

Voted For: -Noble-

Aii This IS What I Feel

This Was A Terrific Battle I See You Two Are Very Skilled But There Is Only One Winner And And Only one Person Can Get My Vote So I Vote for Noble.
His Verse Kept The Strenght And Punchllines Through The Whole Verse but sinner/Imagine Came Strong But Ended A Lil weak There Was Nuttin That really Stood Out much Except That *A & W Line* Which Was great And Sinner Dissin Nobles Momz Was Hillarious But NE Way My vote Is Noble

* Can You Two Return The Favor Plz Vote On My Battle Against IKe (Dont Vote on The Other One Cuz Dude Aint Posted His Verse Yet) But Plz CAn You Do That For mE Stank U Very Much

Oppz I Mean The one Against Lamafia (not Ike ) Thanx

This was feedback posted for Imagine
 

this wasnt the greatest battle ever but, ill break it down 4 yall:

my bad

Yo noble think he got lyrics dat are gonna make me dazzle
to scared to battle cuz he'll know i'll beat him wid no hassle
ok, a few mutlis, nuttin special

he writes lyrics to turn him mom on she undresses in a thong
he just gets turned on by it and starts to think of sex song
too many on's.... wuts a sex song???

you are just a complete comedy act noble ur names just wack
oh no nobles gonna attack!!! better sit back and just laugh
aight... prolly best line




i dont feel like voting so.....

Voted For: -Noble-

mixin 'past with the present'...so dont start a fight..
i imagine.. that ur future.. don't look so bright!!!
^^^^^^^^^^ HE HAD AN LINK GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER

u blowin hot air... just talken shit.. u need to let off steam..
cuz ur sick imagination... is just a 'day dream'!!!
&^^^^^^^^^^^ AGIHT TRY TO LENGTH YA LINES A LIL BIT CAUSE IT KINDA MESSED UP DA FLOW BUT GOOD PUNCH



like try and fail... kid get in fights with his own peers..
Cuz last time L has seen A W... was drinkin the root beer!!*
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT MAYNE GOOD CLOSA

NOBLE-HE HAD HARD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW GOING,PERSONALS AND PUNCHES BUT NICE VERSE MAYNE

DA PUNCHES WHAT AMAZE ME..........WORD




Yo noble think he got lyrics dat are gonna make me dazzle
to scared to battle cuz he'll know i'll beat him wid no hassle
^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD OPENER NOT AN GOOD PUNCH WEAK


he writes lyrics to turn him mom on she undresses in a thong
he just gets turned on by it and starts to think of sex song
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PLAYED OUT NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


you are just a complete comedy act noble ur names just wack
oh no nobles gonna attack!!! better sit back and just laugh
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK CLOSA MAYNE WEAK HOMIE





SINNER-U CAME WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD VERSE U HAD NOT GOOD PUNCHES,FLOW WAS COOL,BUT U UNDERESTAMATED YA OPPONENT,U CAME WEAK JUST BECAUSE HE WAS AN NEWBIE,

BUT W/E
U CAME WEAK NO GOOD DECENT PUNCHES
NO PERSONALS
ALL FLOW

LIKE NOBLE SAID"U JUST BLOWING HOT AIR"

OVERALL= DIS BATTLE GOES HANDS DOWN TO NOBLE
HE JUST CAME HARDER WIT DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES IS WHAT KNOCK SINNER DOWN

SINNER-NEVA UNDERESTAMATE YA OPPONENT JUST BECAUSE HE AN NEWB. U HAD FLOW, BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT HOMIE,YA GOTS TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES.......WORD

Voted For: -Noble-

I think Noble got this...Imagine u had an aight structure but ur punches were lacking and you were rhyming jus to make words rhyme...it's all about making sense and some rhymes were pointless...

Noble u used some good wordplay and also managed to link up ur verse quite well...some people say links are played...if they are used correctly then they to me are dope...also decent structure and flow punches connected and all in all better verse

As for a rtf...take ur pic

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