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wish vs sHoTTaBoY
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wish has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 10:46 AM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 10:49 AM.
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Ima "GAT"-THIS-"FOO" Let the Led TACKLE-YOU
Call me Adolf in this battle cuz Ima ATTACK-THIS-JEW Then SLICE-n-DICE-YA-DUDE, Im TWICE-AS-NICE-AS-YOU Cuz your "punches" wouldnt be "sick" if you ate HEPITITIS-RICE and learned KUNG-FU! Gat, You just spittin DEAD-FLOWS, Ya Wack, Ya TEXT-SHOWS My punches will hit this bitch so hard his fuckin HEAD-EXPLODES! Watch me CRACK-BACK when I SNAP-YA-SPINE after I CLAP-THE-NINE Tuck ya head into ya ass to prove you "fuckin" OUTTA-YA-MIND! Then SNATCH-YA-THROAT, pimp slap and DETACH-YA-SCROTE Cuz the only way shotta will win this battle is if his homies are ASKED-TO-VOTE! I ATTACK-FOR-THE-GREEN, This kid gets bent BACK-WIT-VASOLINE Watch this fool get "COTT" wit so many punches its a CATASTROPHY Ima be FLAWLESS-IN-THIS-FIGHT, Leave shotta JAWLESS-ON-SIGHT Cuz ill "cut this bitch down" to prove im the "TALLEST"-ON-THIS-SITE I see youve been KO'D-ONCE, im battlin a PLAYED-OUT-DUNCE Cuz this bitch is only hard when he sees DAY-OLD-CUNTS You cant FUCK-WIT-THE-ILLNESS, leave you STUCK-WIT-THE-REALNESS Cuz bitch,ill cut off ya hands to prove PEOPLE-WIT-NO-HANDS-FEEL-THIS Ya goin DOWN-TONIGHT, I hold the CROWN-THAS-RIGHT Call me King Kong cuz ima crush ya TOWN-ON-SIGHT |
This Nigguh ''PM'' Me Askin To Be In My ''Crew''..
Hes All Like..''SHOTTA I LOVE YOU..!''.. But That Aint The ''Issue''... I'd Rather Wipe My Ass With Ya Organ ''Tissue''.. I Wouldnt Let ''You'' Join Even If You Rode My ''Penis''.. This Fools From ''Detroit'' n Thinks Hes ''Slim''...Can Y'all ''Believe-This''..?! ..If I Had A Dime For Every ''Em'' Wannabe, I'd Be A ''Millionaire'' The Fact Ya Mommas Ashamed Of You Is The Only Thing To ''Compare''... ...O, Okay, An Your Rockin ''Blonde Hair''....Bitch Please, Take Ya Ass Back To ''8-Mile''.. See Boy, I Own Ya Life Like I Got Ya Life On ''Speed-Dial''... In One Fone Fone Call I Can Have Ya Death Lookin Pretty ''Vile'' An Ya Momma Left Too ''Mourn''.. I Can Make Ya Wonder Why The Fuck U Was Ever ''Born''.. That ''Wish'' You Have Make It Too Good ''Effect''.. An Sit Back n ''Reflect'' How U Got Murderd By A Hot ''Prospect''... I'ma ''Operate'' On Ya ''Bars'' Like A ''Dissect''.. Faggot! You Wouldnt ''Cum Hard'' Even If You Was ''Erect''..! |
Upin...........
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This was feedback posted for wish
wish won. punches hit harder...better flow to the brain cells
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Voted For: wish
dam wish you had better hits in this one than you did vs nutz. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upin
no bullshit vote like hotrod posted |
Upin
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Voted For: wish
wish crushed him.... flow: wish punches: wish *by far* creativeness: wish *by far* i thought this would be closee then it was, but he just got delt with easy ........ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... wish Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Upn........
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upppin 4 votes
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