insane16 vs Ice Pick
 

10-15 lines
no dr hate or crew
u spit first
u get 30 mins to spit after check in

dont accept dis battle till u ready cuz u only gunna get 30 mins iight................

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 12:46 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:50 AM.

Insane Your nothin but a 'hoe'... A 'female'.. And more-ova 'bitch'
So may the best man win, ...Well, it looks like this battles over with
Fuck showmanship, These lines ain't tough to control
I'd fill you with bullets, ...But pussies are already nothin but holes
Makin tracks is pointless, You could never fill the shelfs
Dog you couldn't 'hang in a circle' usin a noose to kill yourself
We can battle to see who's more manly, But i must digress
Ya closets contents are like the fronts of envelopes, Nothin but address
No game havin bitch, Usin slang i ain't to be fucked with
You could give Daffy a cold and couldn't get ya duck sicked
Punk bitch, Ya need to realize i'm know for killin heads
You in this battle is like ya past family members, Relativley dead
Shit, now i`ma have to get real, this bitch is boring too
And I`ma put Insane in a fuckin box... like it was chrismas morning dude
Because you're rhymes take the cake...that came from a urinal (ewwwww)

insane16 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 01:51 PM.

im like 5-0 here to get all ya kids game inspected/
cuz if u like me then u kno major wackness detected/
u must be cursed~doomed to failure~infected/
as my rhymes disperse u get chills like Tupac was resurected/
walk the line! stand up strait! and look in the light please!/
fuked up mind, can't co-operate, so u die in da night breeze/
fukin unleash anger u in danger i pull triggers so eyes freeze/
dont stop until da neck broke, got ur punk ass ina death choke/
cough and gasp for air exactly y dey tell boys dont smoke/
but they dont kno air is more vailuable in the streets/
so act like lil john and jus stick tol makin beats/

iight lets get this shyt goin bes of luk to both peace ~1~................

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yo we need some voters to get this shyt movin foreal.............

yo les go mutha fukers...............................

Voted For: Ice Pick

Aiight this was an aiight battle....
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Opener-Tie
Closer-Ice
Punches-Ice
Structure-Insane
Metas-Ice
Personals-Ice
Multies-Ice
Word Play-Ice
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To me this was a one sided battle........Insane you didnt even say his name in the or anything that has to relate to him witch screams pre-written.....you verse looked like something that would go on Open Mic bad drope for you......Ice your wasnt bad but you can still elevate.......Vote/Ice

Voted For: Ice Pick

aight this was a gud battle
both came good
heres the breakdown

Ice Pick
Honestly, you came fuckin well hot in this battle, some places were pretty basic but overall the verse was hot. u had a tight flow from beginning to end and several funny ass metas. gud wordplay, ure punches were hard throughout i think and overall you just blew insane away. u were stronger in near enough every area of ure verse.

insane16
u dropped gud playa, but only just. ure flow was on, i got into ure verse and read it fluidly from start to finish. u had some alright punches, ure wordplay was pretty basic. i think u can do a lot better, i've seen u do a lot better in fact. wat i think u were lacking on to win the battle was metas, Ice Pick had lots and that is what won him the battle.

VOTE: Ice Pick

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yo dis is insane16 but my new name is soul sickness so im here to up dis shyt but i jus want yall 2 kno insane16 was my old name i had strobe chanhe it..........