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~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-17-04 04:15 PM

ella vs Street poet
 
Battle Rules:

12- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 04:45 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 09-17-04 04:17 PM

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 04:17 PM.

System 09-17-04 04:24 PM

ella has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 04:24 PM.

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-17-04 04:37 PM

...:::WARM-Up:::...
Pounce-wit-Fist..hes the 'Human Torch'! i'll 'Put-out-her-Flames' wit an 'Ounce-of-Piss'...//
like 'Abusive Drinkers'! when u 'Step-wit-Bars' we already knew ur were 'Out-of-It'...//

...:::Murda:::...
On A Spree Of ella~Killin Headed In Your Direction, I’m Like *A Dentist Who Lacks Mad ~Skill ~In His Profession*//
Cuz I’m Givin’ Ellla*Bad~Filling*(Feeling) Cuz This Bitch *Claims To Be Vet* Without Question, While she Remains Most Active In The *Wackness Emergency Section//

Only Time This Cat *“Delivers” Ill Punches* That Hurt Is When she *Distributes Rotten Fruit Juices* To Youngsters Of Sorts//
Left Burned And Scorched, You Need To ‘Elevate’ Dork, Cuz Like *Midgets At Urinals* You’re Just *Coming Up Short*//

...:::FlatLINE:::...

This Cat’s Pissed Cuz His Styles Are Whacked And I’m Puttin *Hats On His Fists* To Leave His Punches *Hand-I-Capped*//
And It’s A Sad Mishap Cuz Like *Misplacing A Fire Stick* ella Has Just *Lost This Match*//
Looking Dense, I’ll *Cut Off My Fist And Lend It To You* At My Expense, To *Give You A Hand* At Comprehending My Intense Concepts//
Here’s An Idea Of Intelligence - Maybe If You *Put Your Nose Up To The Monitor* My Lyrics Would *Start To Make Scents(Sense)*//

Leave This Bitch An *Oxymoron* Again, Cuz After This Battle Of 'Kin' People Won’t Know Whether His Mouth Is Forming *A Frown Or A Grin*//(if you don’t get what I’m inferring to…just ask)
But, What’s A Surely Shown Sin, Is That Like *Rich Gannon Throwin W’s* poet Has Just *Turned-Over The Win*//

we losin her,,, help! doctor help!


Its ova kid....once again....../\/\/\_____FLATLINE_______

ella 09-17-04 04:43 PM

shit i just lost my whole verse.

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 09-17-04 04:46 PM

well u have 30 minutes left

ella 09-17-04 04:54 PM

hes 7 and 1...but hes open to newbs.
these facts showin him truth...cause he as fake as the sylicone in ma boobs.
hes like charcoal in fumes...how hes stuck in the fire.
hes really a joke to the community...like if dopes were duckin empire.
like your gigs were deserted...similiar to how you sorta spoke.
a former dope was distilled...havin boards showin ma rhymes as a horoscope.
his flows a quarter broke...and its only the first half.
your verse slaps rookies from death back into a birth cast.
see when i kill it, theres no reincarnation or justice.
im precise until my motives finsih my patient to bust****

cant finish. pz.

WhiTe_Tee 09-20-04 09:04 PM

This was feedback posted for Street poet
 
why do u bite... petty... petty... any vet knows u bit

-EXPLICIT- 09-22-04 09:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Street poet
 
Checkin ish out..x

Klassic 09-22-04 09:49 PM

Voted For: Street poet

aight this was a pretty much no challenge. Street just had way better structure. His punches were stronger then ella's, she just needs a bit of elevations(box a bit) bit still he had it wit, ounches, multies were aight

Drop an honest vote in my battles (sig)

Parallel 09-30-04 06:29 PM

Voted For: Street poet

k clearly street poet won this if this is street poet but if not then name is ill prophet or w/e heres what i got on this nice battle:

ill prophet:
k you came hard nice vocab and stucture a little off on the flow but still aight there and you had soem hard hitten punches whitch i liked and some dope wordplay take it a lil harder next time coulda been better

ella:
k you clearly got KOed you had nothing in yer verse so vocab no wordplay no hard hitten punches no good stuctyre and eyr flow was off and no multi's you pretty much got KOed one person match lol.

VOTE: ill prophet, or w/e it is

return the favour in my battle verse mike hawk the links in my sig thanks peace

SubtleTee 09-30-04 06:33 PM

Voted For: Street poet

Oh shit!

Prophet straight Killed this shit! I mean, ella was alright....but that's that. She's just alright. Prophet is the first sick MC I've seen in the Front Lines. HIs punches were harder and he actually used things like metas multis and personals. The punchlines were sick. Stay Up.

~IiL PrOpHeT~ 10-02-04 05:37 PM

yo uppin for mo votes uppin come on peep'z vote or die

~peace~

SubtleTee 10-02-04 05:47 PM

Alright, nevermind. Prophet bit that. Too bad I voted for him. Herb.

AutoMATIK™ 10-02-04 05:50 PM

Voted For: ella

vote for this person ^
cuz Ill Prophet bit that verse ...

i have proof ... but he knows where he bit it from ...



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