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Artemis 09-17-04 06:08 PM

verse yo, dopeness!!! (Better than my last one) LMfAO!!!
 
For a track I'm doin':

yo, I'm back again, and I'm "sackin" you fuckin' haters
I'll have you seein' black, like the logo of the Oakland Raiders
Yo girl, I got her laid hurr, she hated you and got rid
So you got more fuckin' bitch slaps than the wife of Jason Kidd
No wonder yo face is fucked, you got an ugly mug, dude
Yo face is is like Jacko's nose, man, it's all chewed
And yea, that shit is tru, goin' against me, jus ain't right
Cuz the "Perfection" in my verse, is like a "Stepford House Wife"
You like to "Taste the Rainbow", (YOU FAG!) you're suckin' little
I'll have you reppin' my first intial, like a fuckin' Skittle
Yo flow is gooey like "Chocalate", but you expect a lot of flatters
You against me, I'll end up wit an upside down Marshal Mathers
drinkin' a glass of "hood", is the closest you'll get to G
I spit jus like a "dog", I got these "cats" runnin' up a tree
You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done"
Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns" (FAG!)


That's word. Feedback plz. :)

Artemis 09-17-04 06:44 PM

don't Z nigs. :) upp...

Artemis 09-17-04 09:15 PM

upp...

distilled 09-17-04 09:16 PM

Weeerd man, thats a nice drop I notice the Oakland Raiders, familiar......

Lol, nah man that was decent whats this track?

MC Prephickz 09-17-04 11:59 PM

nice drop, like the word play and format of the drop. Nice job keep doin it big

Artemis 09-18-04 12:03 AM

aiight thanks for comments. uppin'...

EmerginMc07 09-18-04 01:04 AM

dat was preety good

Artemis 09-18-04 02:03 PM

thx. up....

Artemis 09-18-04 04:48 PM

upp....

Keith Moon 09-18-04 05:48 PM

thats dope bor...ya hsouldve used this agiansdt some kid in a battle......

Artemis 09-19-04 01:12 AM

that's word. :) thx. lol upp...

Hate chew 09-19-04 05:11 AM

yeah this is allright man ..... dropt some nice rhymes in it ..
but you shoulda saved this for a battle.......

repay the favur man
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150419


pz


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