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clear the quotes(set the record strait)
jus a quick thing..jus felt like rappin
ima jus keep goin till I get tired... rap kinda slow on this one... all this shit true i got no reason to front I know i'm not meant for here...my kind is different too these niggas i see them leer...they lookin down on me like they veiw my as mere... I hold no fear...to those who purposley invade my space... tryin to intimadate... thinking I can't hold my own because of my body weight... everyday look at my face...it never changes shape... I never smiled ever since the burb air I taste... all the money is spent on the home appraised... so I must stay here they say...thoughts of running away... though i never made it passed my lawn... I touch the grass..turn around..thinkin bout what would my parents do if i was gone... two years ago my one thought i had was only a female... now i'm baically only on my Dale...reeranging words... thinkin of combinations of the words I spell...some say "no life"... at least now I see my days in a new light... if you don't understand, my man at least try to veiw you and your life through a new insight.... I apolgize if I didn't apply with your issue... I wish i can solve your ploblem but this is only the trals I been through...maybe soon someone will understand and I can have a mentor... High School sent me to a coucler...no help was givin... all he did was spit sayings he didn't bearely listen... the only homie I trusted...the only nigga I adjusted... is the one nigga I know that went to prison.... I don't wanna live through my life as another menace... I take out my aggression on all of my printin's ok I need to know if I got Talent or not cuz if I don't then this isn't for me... BE HONEST cuz I don't wanna waste my time on RV if i'm hittin a brickwall with rap here... ps. Thank you all of Rapverse.com for helping me reach the level i'm at at least I've gotten much betta then when I 1st arrved here even the niggas I beefed with it's been real!!! ~1~ |
how do 11 people read this, but none actually reply?
uppin for some |
please
please please please crit |
god damn
all my open mics never get ANY feedback WHAT-SO-EVER can some one please jus tell me how was it? |
man yer in ma crew dope dope dope i liked yer cerse it had flow and complex vocab to:) i liked it man but it needs more time put into creativity on metas n shit:) 8/10
check out my openmic in ma sig |
this was nice man .. good vocab ..had some personal views on shit .... good flow.............. 7/10............
repey the favour man .... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150419 pz |
uppin
Real ima return the favor right now I beleive if you care about yo music that much to type it out and post it I should at least read it right? E jus critted yours peace |
I wasnt feeling your voacab...But I liked the picture it painted 7/10 Uppin for pro
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thanx for critin mayn :)
i returned the fav cuz i appreciate that shit uppin for mo crits peace |
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