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ContagiousVenomz vs Proverse
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-21-04 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 09:45 PM.
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ContagiousVenomz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 09:45 PM.
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Bitch, im serious and psychologically delirious/
leave you subject to infections like eatin bitches on their period// Look, Picture your moms at ur funeral thatz a closed casket/ 2 days later, i Fed-Ex your remains in a clothes basket/ rotten and infested by a congregation of maggots/ open ur mental with cookin' utensils, cuz thatz what we do to faggots/ your rhymes resemble ur grandma's tits 'cause they over-used, droopin' and saggin"/ How da fuck were you conceived? ur moms must've licked the semen from the napkin/ Bitch! The Lyncher come to distribute continuous lyrical pain/ superior lyrical verses deteriorate your skull, look like Godzilla stepped on ur brains/ im insane/ consume my supper while watchin' ur plasma drain/ envision your head and shoulders seperated by a window pane// I was lyricsizing while you was spinnin' bottles and playin footsy/ 1 chick in your whole clique but all you niggas pussy/ 5 dicks and a pretty tushy// (LaLa) i know she aint fuck 'em all/ so who's the Fowl Mouf and who's the ODD BALL?// Get it? dont fuck wit it/ you lyrical unintelligent, couldnt bust a egg with an iron skillet/ Ill make u swallow gasoline and send a lit match to go and get it/ you must've left your lyrics in the same spot u shitted/ Ultmate verbal terminology burns this bitch in the third degree/ Bitch if you were born with 10 dicks you still couldnt fuck with me/ this coward's yellow like urine residue on toilet seats/ Dusty Blunted get smoked with superior lyrical heat/ This bitch lost the battle with his penis when he tried to beat his meat// |
i went easy on this one..don't feel to god about that rhyme
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you have one win...wow...it still for you no trouble to lose because you're named after something that makes others improve but still you prove elevation isn't waiting,only ink wasting your rank want even attempt a move,liked UHAUL has lost there placement you "draw" losses like your one win has missplaced a "tracing" even your VENOM isn't sick, it barely phases to create a sensation i'm sure it crossed your mind..."man, i believe that rap isn't for me" I predict you verse has the worst...probably used self glory you bite off other sites...you CROOKED like lyrics wih braces, double sides to you, which explains your two higher casing (C-V-) .::PV is finished::. yo was i right?did he have any self glorification lines? i can't see untill I post my verse |
Voted For: ContagiousVenomz
HAHA NICE BATTLE BUT I THINK CV WON CUS HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES THA FLOW WAS A LIL OFF BCUS THA PEPL HE WAS SAYIN(LALA) WHO THAHELL IS THAT BUT NO HATE.. HE HAD GOOD MULTIS AND I LIKED IT PV URS WAS KOO 2 BUT I THINK CV CAME A LIL HARDER YA STRUCTURE WAS BETTER THO Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo mayn you sure you aint recycle or bite?
you spit ALL that in 3 minutes unless you got supa hands that seems impossible |
uppin this shit
don't sleep on this i'm 100%sure you DR'D man and i aint persuaying cuz they can't read my post untill the vote so jus admit you cheated and i won't get you banned :) |
i work for adz, a computer place, where i type all day..i didn't bite or recylce, stop being a bitch, because mine was better...
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actually you had no personals at ALL
you coulda used that shit against any rapper here so THAT'S why i susect you of biting or recycling boy u not even in my league don't even play :) |
im new to the rappin sites, my friend made this name for me..yo stop gurlin, and in your league, my name is more complex than your whole rhyme book..
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yo don't sleep on this battle, lets get some votes
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Voted For: ContagiousVenomz
ContagiousVenom won this battle easily...spit harder punches, and came right at proverse...flow was there, but what stood out were all those punches...nice wordplay and metas as well...Proverse you didnt really have alot of punches in your verse, and the punches you did have were pretty weak...so, overalll, C.V takes this battle |
This was feedback posted for ContagiousVenomz
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6 he had to use his own verse i know u from kali homie dis is da CAPTIAL E
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