lyricist#1 vs WORDPLAYA
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 12:31 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lyricist#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 12:35 AM.

word playa / yo i got more ritches than u / fucked more bitches than u/ only thing i havnt got is more stitches than u/ fuckin punk u aint a leada what, no buddy followed u/ u was never shit, yo mutha shoulda swolloed u/ a rhyme biter thats what he is/ he might be good but he cant beat this/ im a death rappa/ also a swell one/ in a battle i cook mcs well done/ front and get sent to hell son/ my hits are consecutive/ im a lyrical executive/ bite my rhymes and i wont let u live/ ur not only broke, ur chicken too/ and pussy thats y ima be stickin u/ i got rhymes so hot, leave u melted/ ur a pussy thats y u felt it/ yo u got delt wit

WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 12:56 AM.

go head spit ya verse
ima spit right after u
aight

aight man there goes my rhyme
now ur turn to spit

so impatience ..........ima cut em like a deck of cards
if his nuts was made of steel u couldn't play ball hard
a retard thinkin he smart kuz he spelled his name right
call him Ali cuz his verse is shakin n won't win a fight
steadily bite his prewrite is still bein writin as we battle
cerebral cortex ruined screwin his shine so he n shadows
beat em wit paddles kuz his nuts as smalls ping pong balls
dats why i call his girls draws Niagra kuz dey always fall

[CLOSER]
but its yo fault......... for bein n da GAME n u steadily frontin
it aint nuttin to take u out shouldn't a pushed Joe(s) Buddens

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

wordplaya didnt drop the gretest peice .. but you still took this .. you had better punche's .more creative rhyme's..
lyricist ..your rhymes where biten ..and just cant pin point where i seen them b4. yo i got more ritches than u / fucked more bitches than u/ only thing i havnt got is more stitches than u/ fuckin punk u aint a leada what, no buddy followed u/ u was never shit, yo mutha shoulda swolloed u..i no for a fact i have seen heard these line's before.... ...... can you get banned for using this amount of line's in a battle?

yeh true that part was biten i'll admit, but it gives me a star. the rest is all mine tho

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

i vote for you because the other dude is a biter...


http://community.rapverse.com/showp...6&postcount=275

i aint no biter i write my own shit. i only started with that line

then why didnt you give him credit for the line...bottom line you bit about a third of your verse then you spent the rest of your verse talking about how the other guy was a biter...if you take only the part that you wrote and put it against wordplaya you still lose...

This was feedback posted for lyricist#1
 

lmao.............................................. .

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

aight, not the strongest battle in the world...

both emcees lacked real hard hittin personals an punches, Playa gt the better vocab an the better structure...
both need elevation..

lyricist ya structure was way off, it was ard to get into ya flow with the poor structure...
work on that dogg...
no hare

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

Voted For: lyricist#1

lyricist#1 his style was tight truly tight.........best line was.....
{im a death rappa/also a swell one/in a battle i cook mcs well done}.....tight...........and that other fella was aight.......his best line was...........{he spelled his name right call/him ali cuz his verse is shakin n wont win a fight} but im juss gotta tip lyricist#1