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CFAstunna1 09-19-04 08:16 AM

CFAstunna1 vs final
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 08:16 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

CFAstunna1 09-19-04 08:17 AM

Iight Nicca Lets Do This Nice And Sweet

System 09-19-04 08:19 AM

CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 08:19 AM.

CFAstunna1 09-19-04 08:20 AM

im tellin u niggaz u dont wanna hear my glock sing the way ur blood was on ur shirt it looked like a miskeen a wear meezan or meja mikasa u keep talkin shit u gonna see my meja
A-Kasa i wear nothin air onez and girbaud wit wite t and a chain wit rolls gold u dont want shit man uz a bitch man wit the ak or 9 u gonna get hit wit man i dont kare no more and ur girl'z still a hore and while im getin richa ur steel gettin poor and dont think takin a shot at me will com painless ill find out were u r and hit u wit the stainless...steel that is wit a laza and shit i aint and one but my girl still say im sik wit it but on the mic im a professa cuz ill have the gun giv u a pop quiz and have ur brainz out like cheez wiz i could rap fast i just chooz not cuz i wanna rip u niggaz as slow az booze rots ayo i got to go so smoke a blut while im in ur mamaz bead........fukin ur ho

System 09-19-04 12:35 PM

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 12:35 PM.

Compose 09-19-04 12:39 PM

with this kids record, all hes gettin is neglected/
not being respected, now hes yearning for attention/
hes not accepted, cuz his rhymes are needing help/
you couldnt STUN a crowd if you had a tazer on your belt/
you claim that your a gangsta and your toatin glocks/
you couldnt be a G if you pac in ya socks/
ima keep elevating until im at the top/
but for you, my advice is to just switch to rock

Compose 09-19-04 12:50 PM

^pac=2pac but i think thats pretty straight foward

good luck uppin this, no hate honest votes

peace

Compose 09-19-04 03:07 PM

uppin............................................. .

intensify effect 09-19-04 03:51 PM

Voted For: final

honestly this was hand hard to vote on but look...

flow: final
punches: none
creativeness: CFA
strucsure final

vote: final...

CFA u'r verse sound more like a open mic then a battle....
but u still had some good lines but i wouldnt follow them
brake ya lines up dont make them look like a praragraph cuz that def wont help u but u was more creative N that was about it....

Compose 09-19-04 04:15 PM

uppin............................................. ...

Compose 09-19-04 06:17 PM

uppin again..........................more votes....

Compose 09-19-04 07:51 PM

uppin............................................. .....

Ras Tafari 09-19-04 10:55 PM

Voted For: final

My vote goes to final because his structure wasn't fucked up and he had good punches and some OK personals.
Stunna,your verse was pretty much garbage.You had some crappy attempts at wordplay and your punches were very soft-hitting. final,i liked your very last line,the gumour was pretty good in there.Stunna,you should get a new structure,elevate with your wordplay, and get some better punches.

V/final.

Compose 09-20-04 02:38 PM

aight thanks uppin this more votes get it over with..........

Compose 09-20-04 05:39 PM

uppin............................................. .


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