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.::critical::. vs mattee1
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.::critical::. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 10:33 AM.
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MATTEE1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 10:48 AM.
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belive when i say you wack im only just spellin-facts ...
you couldn't serve me a beat-in if your were sellin- tracks ... acceptin ma callout, but i'll let you off coz your really stupid-hoe ... i leave u lookin more humilaited then janet jackson at the superbowl ... i "pack" more "nines" then a deck of cards that will damage ya text ... jus like pam anderson, if i take away wat ya got you'll have nothin left ... hern ya like a birthday clown all u makin a foolish pattern ... change ya name to feaces, coz when you drop we can say shit happened ... |
yo dawg i think it would b a good idea to vacate diss building, in fact i think it'll b CRITICAL//cos when ima lay ma first post down u'll be embarrassed and filled with RIDICULE//this guy's never gunna be a monumentel HIT//shit fuck it i'll give u this, its a HOW TO RAP BATTLE KIT//go home and study it and come back when u'v gotta style to FLIP//youre gunna be left speechless when i give you one taste of ma LIP//ur a fucken faggot so go have a DIP in sum cunts ass//man you'll wanna have a strong VOCAB cos i'll smash u like GLASS//i admit it, beatin me is'nt an IMPOSSIBLE task//but u'd wanna have a REAL MC impersonality under ur fake ass JASON mask.....
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... uppin this shit for votes ... |
Voted For: MATTEE1
Vote:Matte1 Lyrics: tied OPening:critical Ending:critical Punches: mattee1 wordplay:matte1......rap battle kit...DOPE!! Structure: matte1 flow: tied Originality:critical Metas: mattee1 Overall..fairly gd battle ...quite close but that rap battle kit line was dope1 Peace and return favour wit honest votes. |
Voted For: .::critical::.
well this wasnt the best battle, but it was aight, critical had a better structure, although it was a bit of for both, no personals so yea. The punches were weak (if any). Vocab was pretty weak as it comes, but critical just had it better drop an honest vote on my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149663 |
... uppin for votes, elusiv ya gotta be kiddin, must of bin coz a KO'D ya, lol, oh well ... |
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Voted For: .::critical::.
.::Critical::. had dat 1 Better Structure, Nice Punchlinez & WordPlay... Brought it 2 him Hard, It was good... Return da Favor if u can Critical |
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Voted For: .::critical::.
matt: ya shit was ok.. was pretty standard though, get more creative. and fix ya structure.. put it into lines, paragraph is way hard to read. crit: word! multis! but anyway, nice flow, decent punches... coulda got more personal, but whattya gonna do.. |
Voted For: .::critical::.
Ha Ha 1 Sided Battle Here.. Critical Punches: Decent Punches I Like The Sellin Tracks 1 7/10 Creativity: Nice I Guess 7/10 Vocab: Not All That Great But Still Murked Him 6/10 Overall: 20/30 mattee1 Punches: Were Pretty Weak No Offence.. Elevate Urself.. 5/10 Creativity: Dull Boring Just Like A Little Kid On WinMx... 5/10 Vocab: Half Decent Ill Give You That Much.. If You Had Better Punches This Wouldn't Really Matter Then 6/10 Overall : 16/30 Fair Vote.. Return Tha Favour |
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