new stuff right chia!
 

I spit fire like a volcanoe spewin/
Reviewin the constitution for further confusion/
Clearence in apperance the fear is in slugs/
Flyin like bugs to tug at ya thugs/
Leavin them gaspin hardly breathin and askin/
"Am I gonna die?" dawg I am so old fashion/
I eat bones of emcee's like tic-tacs and rations/
Blastin my lyrical rapid-fire my raps is hire your raps desire/
A listener to like or review whats truth/
Becuz 95% of ya rhymes is planes lies/
And the other 5 is whats dreamed and designed/
Cant deny whats trully inevidable/
My raps plus voice are nuttin short of incredible/

(kinda short, jus felt like doin an OPENMIC) uppin^^^^

^^^^^^uppin Yallllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^^^^^^

nice drop nigga, vocab was on point, i liked the flow too overall nice shit

thnx my nigga, we gotta get some of dem sigs lol

this was an okay drop... could have been alot better... your vocab was iight i guess. but your multies were weak ... structure was okay... but i advice you dont /// use those lines to end you lines... naa'mean...overall keep it up and you'll do fine

pz.

That Was A Aight Drop Dawg Your Vocab Was Aight And Structure Was Aight But The Lines Gotta Be The Same Length No Multi's at all Dont Use /// At The End Use ... Those Aight But oVERALL Some OF The Punches In There Hit Hard

No Hate

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